Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
Mahatma Gandhi, Father of india, Born on October, 2, 1969. he was a great national freedom fighter. His full name was Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi. Mahatma-Sanskrit word-means century person having great influence over community. before him condition of india was not much good, British ruled for approx 150 yrs and after that india became independent on August,15, 1947. he had huge impact on community as well as world wide. he finished his study of LLB abroad and after returning home he saw poverty and worst condition of common people stude by them.
many people like Shubhaschanra Bose, Bhagat Singh, Chandrashekhar Azad moreover Swami Vivekanand also inspired people about freedom but gandhi had a marvelous success. “live simple and think big” was motto of his life. he choose the path of ‘Ahinsa’- live and let live. people called him ‘Bapu’. Salt movement and Swadeshi (preference to products produced within country) were one of the remarkable events of indian history. he inspired people to joint the independent movement without doing any harm. At the end of 1946 all nation stand with him to fight for a nobel purpose.
he lived his life with simplicity. This simplicity attracted people like Nelson Mandela. He was inspired by Gandi thoughts and applied same in his life as well as country Afria. Mandela helped Africa to take breath of freedom. many people still follow his not only thoughts but also guidelines. Today movies like My name is gandhi, Munabhai MBBS are based on either his life or thoughts. Furthermore, one famous quote said by him was, If someone slaps u then u just give him another cheak to slap on and that person will fell asaimed and will surely improve in his life.
Last but mot the least his life was filled with morality, hard feelings against killer tendency and soft heart for poor people therefore everyone from all over world bows before him. Nathuram Gondse shot him on chest and at the end of his life he asked to forgive Nathuram. By the honour of him after death indian government till now producing currency having his photo on it. Hence, proudly I can say that no one was like him in past and not in present and there is very less probability that it will happen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95526315789 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63507530892 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628947368421 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2791147156 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.32 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854317643949 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254233025344 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216905790981 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553204164815 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00659417171986 0.0645574589148 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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