always telling truth is important consideration is any relationship.
is it prudent to say that sharing everything is very good? Two different perspectives emerge while meticulously evaluating this issue one is in affirmative with aforementioned question and other disagrees cogently. Personally I have proclivity towards thought that sharing everything in any relationship is not good and this is explained by using following examples.
Let us consider relation between patient and doctor. if patient is suffering from last stage disease and is weak from heart then hiding truth works better. telling truth to patients will reduce his life and chances of curing will be less as 50% of diseases are said to be cured by mind. good mental condition is necessary for faster recovery.
In another case, we adopted a kid from orphanage and accidently someone told him that he was adopted. this hurt him more than anything but we somehow convinced him that he was not adopted. it lessened his pain though it was lie it worked very well. someone said that the lie is better than truth if it hurts someone and if from lie we are good things is not lie.
sharing past or telling truth about it to life partner is good but if one of the partner is having bad relationship or incidences in past and now he has chosen to be with current life partner by forgetting everything then there is no use of the truth instead it will generate conflicts in relation. So it is better to hide everything and move on in life.
us;mso-fareast-language: EN-us;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">According to me always telling truth is not most important consideration although telling always builds trust in relationship. telling truth to the parents about friend circle and school can prevent you from bad consequences. After considering both points of view I cogently agree with always telling truth can be harmful sometimes to choosing wisely what we are sharing is vital.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08012820513 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68033024381 2.67179642975 138% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4278333358 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0625 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278781178756 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658733693836 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943627297345 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131688459132 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128624069299 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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