Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. L
Life has changed in the last fifty years. Grandparents could or could not have had a comfortable life. There are some people who believe that in the past grandparents had a smooth life. However, there are other people who think that children, nowadays, have an easy and nice life. I agree with the latter, and I will support my ideas in the subsequence paragraphs.
Since technology has been improving, life has changed for the better. Transportation is totally different from it was in the past. Now, there are faster, more security and fancier cars. Universities students use cars to commute every day, making this practice more efficient and convenient for them. For example, my older kid commutes every day from our house to the university by car. In the past my grandparents had to take buses to do the same trip, spending more time in this practice.
In addition, continuing with other advantages for children today, houses have a lot of convenient appliances such as washdishers, laundries, and drywashers. It is clear that these devices have improved children's lives. For example, during my childhood my grandparents after dinner they had to clean up the dishes by hand. However, this practice has changed, and most of the time people use dishwashers to do that.
Finally, computers and the internet could be named as the most important development in the last few years. In other words, these new technologies made life easier at different levels. For example, in the past in order to do the homework children went to the library or they eventually had an encyclopedia at home for consulting. In contrast, children these days use the internet if they need to search for any information to complete homework. These practices allow them not only to save time but also find the latest available information for specific topics.
In conclusion, in my point of view life has changed for the better. There have been convenient technologies such as updated cars, new appliances at home, and the internet for saving time.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Face to face communication is better than other types of communication such as letters email or telephone calls Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 76
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 60
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children L 70
- franchise 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fasters', 'fasts'?
Suggestion: fasters; fasts
...from it was in the past. Now, there are faster, more security and fancier cars. Univer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97935103245 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78974961247 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536873156342 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7163745151 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.7272727273 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4090909091 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163223749311 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519560407144 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427355003632 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906707064232 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474742531336 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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