live in abig city o small town.
Live in a big city or a small town.
Some people think that living in a small town is easier. Those people believe that in the small town the life is quite and safe. Many people aren’t able to imagine their lives in the big the city. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that living in big city is preferable for me. The basis of my argument is socially, economically, and personally.
First of all, socially, living in a big city has many benefits. First in a large city you will be able to deal with many kinds of people. For example, in the large city there are many people from different world come to work and live. For instance, in Boston many different people of general races are there. Dealing with a variety of people would provide the opportunity for us to expand our knowledge. On the other hand, in a small town all the people are the same; it looks like a big family. Living in a big city is a better chance to enhance your social net work.
In addition, economically, in a big city there are a variety of jobs available. In the city there are many companies, banks, pharmacies. On the other hand, there are only limited chances of jobs available. In the town this is only one pharmacy, one bank and one company. Living in the big city will provide the opportunity to the entire youth generation with jobs. The youth will help the community by working. Every one can benefits the companies’ and the people whom working.
Furthermore, living in the city is more convenient, as we can save money by using the public transportation. In the city there are many of public transportation available, like buses, subways, taxies and moreover. But in the town you have to have a car to go around. Many people can not a ford buying cars. Other people have to pay to park their cars. However, in the city people do not have to struggles with all this problems.
In conclusion, for the reason I stated above. It is better for a lot of people to live in a big city. Living in a big city would provide the opportunity for better living. More chances of work are available; people can increase their social net work and expand their knowledge. Finally, living a bid city is more convenient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...Live in a big city or a small town. Some people think that living in a small...
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...n't able to imagine their lives in the big the city. Although I understand their point...
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...ocially, economically, and personally. First of all, socially, living in a b...
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... work and live. For instance, in Boston many different people of general races are there. Deal...
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... to enhance your social net work. In addition, economically, in a big city...
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Suggestion: benefit
...the community by working. Every one can benefits the companies' and the people whom...
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...eople do not have to struggles with all this problems. In conclusion, for the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55256723716 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59111725065 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408312958435 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.4542482105 48.9658058833 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.1875 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.78125 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78125 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334137935995 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110775496316 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132501925472 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278181122036 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183163097153 0.0645574589148 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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