A lot of students decide to start college right away after graduate school while others believe that it’s much more beneficial to take a gap year. Which do you prefer?
A lot of students decide to start college right away after graduate school while others take a gap year after graduate school. In my opinion, it’s much more beneficial to take a gap year because of three main reasons:
Firstable, students’ studying at college is very stressful, therefore, they need some time to be ready for college. And taking a gap year offer students some time to relax before attending college. Futhermore, students who take a gap year tend to be much more focused and perform well in college. While at the other end of the scale, students who start college right after finishing high school usually get stressful because of their huge workload. I would take my neighbor as an example, he went to Cambridge University at the age of 18; and after a semester studying at Cambridge, he got overloaded and had to drop college. Then he took a gap year and applied to college again; now he is performing pretty well at another university.
Second, students might get a chance to explore themselves in a gap year. A student might have a better idea of the study direction he or she would like to pursue. Students don’t want to choose the wrong study field at college because that would affect them a lot! My cousin attended college immediately after graduate school, and he wanted to become a pharmacist since pharmacists made much money. However, after finish studying, he found working at the drudgery store boring; and he retook college. Now, he is a sorfware developer and he wasted all the time in university learning medicines. Also, in a gap year time, a student can discover a hidden passion!
Finally, taking a gap year, students get a chance to do volunteer works or to make their own projects. Doing works for the community helps to make remarkable improvement on students’ skills. For instance, working on an environmental project for your local community would improve your teamwork skill, your knowledge about the environment and many others. Moreover, a student’s project might even improve his or her job opportunities since companies now care a lot about people’s previous experience.
In conclusion, taking a gap year make students more confident and ready for college. For that reason, I’m going to take a gap year after finishing high school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... gap year because of three main reasons: Firstable, students' studying at co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01291989664 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8158665014 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516795865633 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0643631202 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.777777778 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413544239611 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15026400317 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141957128478 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296857609685 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19067475678 0.0645574589148 295% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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