make decisions alone or not
It goes without saying that in today's progressive and sophisticated world where we live, decision making is the building block of each person's life. Facing with convoluted dilemmas, mankind is preoccupied with making suitable decisions in order to tackle his problems. I, personally speaking, think that one never should make decisions lonely and I have several reasons for support.
First and foremost, by Consulting with others, we have this chance to become aware of the future consequences of our choices. There are many people around us who were in a situation similar to that of us. They made some good or bad decisions which led to their failure or triumph. Therefore, they know the probable positive and negative side effects of our decisions in such conditions. Using our relatives' experiences helps us outweighing the consequences of our decisions and after that make a wise one. As I remember, some years ago I decided to abandon school and start a business. I made that decision on my own and even I did not say anyone about that. I thought it is a wise decision that results in my success in the future. One day, when I was talking to my grandfather, he told me that when he was at the age of me, he decided to give up school and hired at a restaurant as a waiter. He hoped he could earn more money in this way. Some years ago when he was still low-level labor in a restaurant, he saw his previous classmate who was a manager at a great company with high income. My grand father found that if he had continued his studies at college, he could have gained a prestigious job in the industry with high fortune. I found that I was very lucky to hear this memory since I became aware of this fact that if I give up school, I would have the destiny as same as my grand father.
Second, talking to others about our determinations provides us with an opportunity to become aware of various choices and alternatives. When we want to make a decision we are probably biased and our power of thinking about one situation is limited. It is clear that two brains think better than one brain. When we talk about our situation or problem with others, they may have solutions different from that of ours and share their opinions and ideas with us. As a result, we will have various choices in front of ourselves and we can choose the best one to solve our problems. For instance, when I was at high school, I wanted to study art at college since I was talented at that. My relatives told me that I can study another major at university and participate in painting workshops; but, I was determined on my decision and I thought that it is the best way which can lead me to be a successful person. After one year studying art at college, I found Although I am talented in painting, I am not really interested in working as a painter whole my life. In fact, I chose art as my major just because I was good at painting portrays not because it was my desire. All in all, I changed my major and start to study science from scratch. If I had consulted with my family members or other people, I could not have wasted one year of my life.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that we should consult with others after making decisions since we can not only use their invaluable experiences but also benefit from various ideas and opinions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...on making is the building block of each persons life. Facing with convoluted dilemmas, ...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to outweigh' or 'outweigh'.
Suggestion: to outweigh; outweigh
...sing our relatives experiences helps us outweighing the consequences of our decisions and a...
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Line 5, column 1341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld not have wasted one year of my life. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 28.0 11.0286738351 254% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 112.0 43.0788530466 260% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2725.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 608.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48190789474 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9656475924 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59906673983 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463815789474 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 879.3 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1350904128 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3214285714 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151451976855 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550059873597 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740754242024 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147948647102 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915402480178 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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