There is nothing good or evil in this world. It means everything has two sides. Therefore, if you think greed is bad, it is bad. However, if you think about it in a good way, it is good. So, I believe that greed can be a good characteristic. I will use three reasons to support my opinion.
First, a certain amount of greed inspires passion. Many people get greedy and start working. For example, this is the case that one person decides to move to a bigger company because that person is greedy for money or tries because that person is greedy for talent. Therefore, if you get greedy like this, you get passion, so that will lead you to do something. In fact, I was so greedy for smartphones that my parents bought me after studying hard for the test. This is also because my greed for smartphones led me to study.
Second, greed boosts self-esteem. To be greedy is to have such a mind to take care of my own interests after all. So in a way, it can be seen as a heart that comes from protecting myself and loving me. If I think being greedy is just a bad thing and stay put I will lose out and I may end up being ignored. Therefore, I think it is better to be greedy than to yield too much. In fact, in modern society, it seems that concessions alone cannot survive. So, I think a certain amount of greed is for survival and a means to protect myself. If you know how to take care of yourself, your self-esteem will increase on your own.
Last, greed can be the driving force of life. Many people with depression lose their greed. Therefore, being greedy means being motivated to live, so we can not only see it as a bad thing. For instance, when friend got COVID-19, she had a hard time because she had no appetite and no motivation to live, but after she got better, she cheered up. As such,greed is essential to life.
This is all about greed can be a good characteristic. Greed brings passion, raises self-esteem and invigorates life. Of course, excessive greed lets us lose a lot of things, but a little greed brings us so much.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , greed
... she got better, she cheered up. As such,greed is essential to life. This is all a...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, after all, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34635416667 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47158191785 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486979166667 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4838332907 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6071428571 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244873993678 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712378642477 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611659126171 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136001704594 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169651407801 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 11.7677419355 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , greed
... she got better, she cheered up. As such,greed is essential to life. This is all a...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, after all, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34635416667 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47158191785 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486979166667 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4838332907 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6071428571 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244873993678 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712378642477 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611659126171 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136001704594 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169651407801 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 11.7677419355 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.