Many people have pets. Other people don't.In your opinion, is it a good idea to have a pet, such as a bird, dog, or cat? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
in a contemporary world, people are fascinated to have a pet because they are playing a prominent role in society. So there has been no shortage of debate about the impact of animal domestication in humans. However, the question is does it benefit to have a pet? some people believe definitely it is not a good decision to have a pet at home, because it is so expensive and difficult to clean every day. On the other hand, I personally feel it is an advantage to have a pet for reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, pets are rather an animal, they act as security to property. If we have a pet like a dog, it protects the house, even if you are in the home are not. For example, my dog, name tiger is a very protective dog. During the night, he couldn't sleep and he barks a lot if he sees anybody near to my property hence, the pets are very protective and loyal to their owner.
In addition to that, pets can keep you company. If we have a pet like a dog or a cat, we never get bored, because we can play and take him out for a walk and so on. My friend Alex is the best example to illustrate this. when we were studying masters at Ohio state university, he stayed independent house. even though he is single, he always prefers to go home early after class because he had a dog and he likes to play and take him for a walk every day. What more, he had a great company for fun and for doing exercise.
In conclusion, although some people might disagree because of cost and maintenance. I personally believe have a pet is good for better company and protection. so always it is better to have a pet is a good idea
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16666666667 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46142061263 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6687293098 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6111111111 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189405405349 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719305615353 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590749324239 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1373947832 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670275872638 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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