Many people say that the Internet is the most important invention ever. Do you agree or disagree with this and if not, what do you believe to be more important? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Tytle: Important Inventions Other than Internet
Some people may say that Internet is the most important invention ever. This is a statement which a deeply disagree with as I believe there are other inventions that have impacted human and technological, development, health and other aspects of humanity deeply than the Internet. Three inventions I believe are more important are vaccines, electricity and computers.
Vaccines have had a deep impact in both humans and animals life as they have helped to erradicate diseases and stop epidemics. A couple of centuries ago, epidemics used to kill many people, decreasing the World´s population when they struck, such were the cases of epidemics like the Spanish Flu and the Bubonic Pest. Even a few decades ago, people would suffer from physical lifelasting disabilities from Polio's disease.
Another invention that I defend is more important than the Internet, is the electricity. Since the humanity became able to manipulate the electricity, every aspect of human life has changed: people can work as well as during the nights as they could do during the day, there have been great advances in technology and pretty much everything we use every day of our lifes depends on electricity to work.
The last invention more important -in my humble opinion- than internet are computers. With the aid of computers problems can be solved faster than they could before. In fact, humanity wouldn´t have been able to go to the moon without the help of computers. Also, kids are taught how to use computers since they are little because humanity has become aware that computers will continue forming part of people´s life.
Measured by the impacts I have described above, vaccines, electricity and computers are far more important inventions that Internet. They have had and continue having a greater impact either in life´s quality and expectancy or in technonogical and overall development than Internet could ever have.
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- Summarize the point made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the read passage. 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32278481013 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82492681402 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8769855044 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225436746717 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963308119546 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088905780003 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134546180434 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775606429494 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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