Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes. On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities. If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you support or oppose its construction? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
A big building as a shopping center would provide us a lot of benefits, such as: expanding the job opportunities, making easier to go shopping and increasing options to hangout with friends and family. Especially, because we do not have a shopping center here in my city (Polur). In general, everyone would enjoy this new facilities.
The unemployment rate in Polur are increasing in my city day by day. Achieving at this month, the highest level over the last 5 years. Unfortunately, I am taking part of this group of unemployment people. Hopefully, this new construction will help to solve this problem, by offering a lot of new jobs. For example, I have been looking for a job for almost a year but I also have friends waiting for more than that. Actually, many people was considering to live in another city, because some of then do not have even a minimum wage to survive. Now, Polur’s citizens are thinking about remaining in the city.
In addition, how Polur is an inner city, we do not have many options to go shopping. It is a challenge when we need to buy something because we need to travel almost 5 hours to go to a shopping center in a city nearby. However, if we would have a shopping center here, would be so much comfortable and we would not have to spend all day just to buy something. Such as, we are promoting Polur growing and people that leave nearby could come here, to meet the city.
Last but not least, we would have fun by going to the movies because there are not cinema in Polur. Nowadays, it is almost impossible to find a city without a cinema But, Yeah! We do not have one. Also, we would playing games with friends, eating a different taste of food in food court, etc. I can not even imagine who would not like! Certain, everyone here thinking it is an amazing idea.
For those reasons, I just feel benefits in building a shopping mall in my city. Such facility would provide a great growing opportunity to my inner city and also helping to solve a lot of problems that we currently have. Everyone will love, for sure!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...enter here in my city Polur. In general, everyone would enjoy this new facilities...
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...e thinking about remaining in the city. In addition, how Polur is an inner city,...
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...arby could come here, to meet the city. Last but not least, we would have fun by...
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...eah! We do not have one. Also, we would playing games with friends, eating a different ...
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...ne here thinking it is an amazing idea. For those reasons, I just feel benefits ...
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...tly have. Everyone will love, for sure!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, so, then, for example, in addition, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53866666667 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58370965001 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4617651446 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0476190476 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127231952439 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396664378241 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039499198337 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828881661941 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508942329516 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.