Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Life today is more comfortable than it was when you grandparents were children
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I think today’s life has been easier and cozy to live than a couple years ago. Definitely, technology has an important role on this progress, which made life more comfortable. Currently, most part of us do not be able to realize this, but likely our grandparents would be. Activities like, a mobile phone call, paying for bills even at home, buying food, clothes etc. At least a travel could be easier. All those things that most of us considering trivial, our grandparents think it is amazing, for sure!
Always when I have an opportunity, I like to talk with my grandmother about how everything was fifty years ago. I ask her if she is looking at a big difference, between nowadays and when she was a kid. She is always surprise myself, telling me a lot storytelling about her life. For example, my brother live in Portugal and last year we take a trip to visit him. We went to the airport, took the plane and in few hours we could arrived in Portugal. My grandma was impressed because we travel far and quickly. She was taking a nape and when woke up we was already in there. She told me about how much time she spend when she was eight, and usually travel to capital city nearby, to by wood for her mother. She told me that in a god day, could spend almost ten hours in a terrible bus. Undoubtedly todays we have transportation facilities more suitable to travel around the world.
Nowadays, we have the internet since them everything became easier. We can communicate with anyone around the world, learning new things even at home, solve financial problems, watching movies and listening to music to have fun and a bunch of other things. For instance, when my grandfather was a kid he needed to walk almost seven kilometers just to arrived at school. Of course, he got tired, likewise it was hard to focus on classes. Today everything is easier. Also, he told me that how he did not have a computer to use the internet to study, he needed to brough with him tick books. It was so much heavy weight for a child. But, we did not have any choice, he states.
In conclusion, I feel that we are currently making everything is possible to become life more practical and comfortable to live. It is impressive how we change a lot of things in a few time. Actually I am happy because my grandparents are still alive to live all enjoyable things we create.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...rents think it is amazing, for sure! Always when I have an opportunity, I like to t...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'surprised'.
Suggestion: surprised
...s and when she was a kid. She is always surprise myself, telling me a lot storytelling a...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'arrive'
Suggestion: arrive
...ook the plane and in few hours we could arrived in Portugal. My grandma was impressed b...
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Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...re. She told me about how much time she spend when she was eight, and usually travel ...
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Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...city nearby, to by wood for her mother. She told me that in a god day, could spend ...
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Line 3, column 880, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re suitable to travel around the world. Nowadays, we have the internet since the...
^^^^
Line 5, column 605, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...ugh with him tick books. It was so much heavy weight for a child. But, we did not have any c...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...sive how we change a lot of things in a few time. Actually I am happy because my grandpa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, likewise, look, so, still, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51515151515 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60856554244 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554778554779 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1872586559 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105849963644 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315217258674 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027958956741 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621425179745 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125102834866 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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