In many places students must arrive very early in the morning to attend school Some people believe that starting the school day early is the best approach to support learning but others believe that starting the school day at a later time in the mornin

Since ancient times schools started their work very early in the morning and this tradition continued until today. However some educational facilities give opportunity to study much more later but compared with each other, I prefer early studying and here is why.

First of all, human brain better works early morning and this time is the best for studying. Your mind is fresh and you can easily soak up any information like a sponge. The only problem with this time of education is sleep time. Nowadays, it is already normal for kids and teens to sleep very lately. This is obviously shortening sleeping time which will have a awful negative impact on their health and learning skills.

Secondly, with this type of learning, they have a lot of free time during the afternoon and evening. This free time can be used for playing games, reading an additional books which they want, talk to their friends or doing homeworks. The last one is really important because it is indivisible part of learning and education which makes the knowledge keep stronger in your mind. Also, we must also remember that besides schoold, children may have a lot of other activities and trainings and for it they also need a huge amount of free time.

And finally, a huge part of available jobs now have a constant and defined time schedule of work which is very close to the school ones. This means that after finishing the school, you and your body will be already familiar with waking up at a very early morning. For employee, it is benefit too because you are ready for working from the beginning of the job and it is more likely that you will finish much more tasks at the same amount of time.

In conclusion, I would like to say that if most of the schools now teach so early it lead us to thing that that morning education proved his benefits and it is much more better thaan late time education. Untill something new wil be offered, this type will remain as a best one.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: an
...hortening sleeping time which will have a awful negative impact on their health a...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'book'?
Suggestion: book
...or playing games, reading an additional books which they want, talk to their friends ...
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Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...st of the schools now teach so early it lead us to thing that that morning education...
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Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...tion proved his benefits and it is much more better thaan late time education. Untill somet...
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Line 9, column 267, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...il be offered, this type will remain as a best one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28508741404 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.02884702 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0625 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198158915321 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690354180997 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634370896349 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124914144337 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620593860709 0.0645574589148 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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