Many schools do not allow students to take their laptop computers into the classroom. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having laptop computers in the classroom? Use specific details and examples to support your opinion.
Over the past few decades, still some called into question whether using a laptop in the class is helpful or not. In my view, I assume there is a wide range of underlying privileges as well as handicaps, which would be illuminated throughout this essay.
To come straight to the point, learning lessons in the school by means of laptop possesses full of advantages not only for pupils but also for their teacher. First thing now comes to my head is motivation. With the advent of state-of-the-art technologies, loads of changes have happened for children life and gone those days young generations had a tendency to spend a great deal of their time with studying(Rewrite). I assume this new method could grab their mind to do educational assignment very well and listen to their teacher at heart in the classroom(Rewrite). Take my brother school which is changed their strategy so as to teach lessons, in particular, harsh and core ones like science and math via a personal computer as an example; are being successful turn my brother mind toward these tedious fields(Rewrite). Simply put, the laptop shown movies, photos, and so forth.
On the other hand, it goes without saying that drawbacks should not be ignored. Regard this side it is worth mentioning that if pupils hang on with their laptops in the class for several times in succession, probably it will has dire profound impact on their mind(Which impact?). For instance, shaking concentration or after a wide they losing their own creativity(Rewrite). Let clarified more and more that if student just type a keyboard, they will not write with hand to create a beautiful handwriting; however, it gives them a hand and accelerates note-taking. Or individuals suffering from hyper-activation cannot easily sit behind their computer so as to study humdrum lessons(Rewrite)(Stick to the question.).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, well, as to, for instance, in particular, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06885245902 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13035609258 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662295081967 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2498470774 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162117213536 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487556442019 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362102984749 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096987611827 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348529415184 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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