Many students choose to attend universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Include specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Studying abroad is one way of growing intelligence. It is the most advantageous experience students could have to broaden prospects in life. By studying abroad, students have the chance to explore different cultures of foreign countries and discover career opportunities for their future.
Studying abroad is living in a different environment, engaging, and interacting with people from different cultures. This could be challenging for students at first and some people even think that it is worthless as it usually means being apart from the family. However, this experience helps students to improve sociability, maturity and confidence. Moreover, the students will have a better perspective of the world and recognize more cultures of the country.
Another benefit is being able to travel easier to other countries around where the students are studying abroad. Students can experience more and save more money than traveling to the same countries from their home country as it saves transportation expenses for the most and fees for other things as well such as accomodation expenses. Students should use their time to explore the world as well as learning about the world which is why they should travel more while they are studying abroad and gain new knowledge about the place.
Finally, studying abroad increases job opportunities. What most companies see is that students who studied abroad are independent, willing to face challenges, and able to tackle problems more easily than others who stayed locally. In other words, companies see the resumes of each applicant and people who studied abroad will be given a priority for having numerous experiences. This means they have greater chances of getting a better job than other average students that studied locally.
In conclusion, studying abroad has many benefits of growing experience and opportunities. Students gain tons of new knowledge while there as well. Improved career choices is one other advantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies. Students gain tons of new knowledge while there as well. Improved career cho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4498381877 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7986361954 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508090614887 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1736775997 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0588235294 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25436437281 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921018058301 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420413951056 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156324534884 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354824099443 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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