Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
Some students should live away from their parents or family while they go to university or school. Sometimes they must be prepared to share their new home with other people. Although there are different opinions about how a good roommate should be, I believe that responsibility, and being communicative and friendly are the most important qualities.
The first point is that a good roommate should be responsible. There are some rules to follow when people live together. For instance, cleaning rules. A good roommate is tidy and clean. If he or she is untidy, it could turn into a living problem because I consider myself a tidy person. In fact, I remember a summer vacation with one of my friends who did not clean his room. I had to do it. If he were a responsible person, he would not have had this behavior.
Another important quality is being communicative. A good communication among roommates is necessary in order to minimize the conflicts. There will always be differences between people who live in the same home, for example, regarding privacy, noises, food, bills and others. When the conflicts arise, the roommates must discuss them as openly as possible, always with respect, in order to overcome these problems.
The last characteristic that should be mentioned is friendship. People who live together can share activities such as playing sports, watching movies or playing cards. Moreover, if roommates have a good relationship, they can be friends and also study together. In fact, they can also support each other in on challenging days. Additionally, I consider that a good roommate could be a good listener and offer you help when needed.
To sum up, a responsible and friendly roommate probably will make the university or school life more enjoyable. For that reason, it is important to choose them carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04918032787 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85897879356 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3622262508 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8636363636 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68181818182 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251475299189 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711374204592 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564136250959 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137201311044 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242668235667 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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