The most important problems affecting the society today can be solved during my lifetime.
Accompanied with the development of society, many most important problems flourish and block the improvement of society, such as environmental protection, medical and employment issues. Some people claims that it is hard to deal with so many most important problems today. However, my view is that today is the best and the most possible time to solve the most important problems affecting the society and it is fairly possible that I will witness the success of the most important problems in the society solved during my lifetime.
Initially, the improvement of awareness on social problems gives social problems a chance to be well dealt with. General people have realized that most of social problems are relevant to their own life, such as environmental protection issues and health care systems. For example, they are more vulnerable to disease if they live with a lot of pollution. As a consequence, they have more sense of social responsibility and are willing to solve the social problems incorporated with local government. The more individuals work together towards a common goal, the quicker social problems can be solved. There is a good example of environmental protection issue. Once publics take environmental protection as their own responsibility, they are intended to choose more environmentally friendly lifestyles. They are willing take public traffic instead of driving cars. And when they plan to buy cars, they will take the fuel-efficiency into consideration. This way, the electronic cars will take place the cars consuming gasoline, which reduced the harmful gas and air pollution.
Additionally, having awarded the serious importance of solving social problems, government developed a complete policy system, which speeds up problem solving. Many most social problems cannot be solved by residents themselves, and their solutions need supports from governments’ complete policy system. For example, publics have difficulties in being accessible to hospital because of cost and distance, which troubles people for a long time. Market-oriented reform increases the price of certain medicines and advanced technology devices require higher expenses, which cause extra economic burden for general people. The improved health care system expands health care coverage by establishing social medical insurance that can be afforded by a vast majority of people. Besides, the health care system spares no effort in building hospitals in rural areas and recruit elites who have not only receive excellent but also gain sufficient clinical experience, which has solved the problems on distance of hospitals.
Although it takes a long time to solve many social problems that have boosted nowadays admittedly, I still hold the positive attitude on the fact that the most important problems affecting the society today can be solved during my lifetime. Since the development of public awareness on participating in social problems solving and policy system, I have witnessed many problems having been solved and I have benefited from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2594.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50743099788 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94950998974 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509554140127 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 816.3 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3887927955 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.523809524 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37502753068 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111156151636 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148785177677 0.0737576698707 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280433027069 0.150856017488 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160403888134 0.0645574589148 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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