Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor?
There are a lot of people who live near us and effect on our live quality. There are some good features that I expect from my neighbor such as being respectful, helpful, and quite, which will discuss in following paragraphs.
First of all, neighbors should be respectful, which means respect to others privacy and do not invade to others right. As majority people live in cities, which are includes apartments and buildings with several flat, so they have much communication with their neighbors. Live in peace and enjoyable life is brought about as a result of good communication with the people who live around us. Some neighbors examine in others life and cause some problems.
Furthermore, being helpful is another merit of good neighbor. These days because of some problems such as finding new job, education, medicine treatment, etc. people must move to other cities or countries, so they get far from their family and kin. In other words, our neighbor being the closest people to us if there is any problem in our life. For instance, two years ago my parents went to Mecca for a month. When they wanted to come back, I decided to celebrate their entrance. But as I was alone and there were no cousins, who live near our home to help me, I had problem with celebrating. Likely, some of our neighbors helped me to handle this and pass this issue in good condition.
Last but not less, being quite is important key factor for good neighbor. As mentioned above most of people live in crowded cities, so they need to live in quite place and far from stress and struggle. My friend moved to his new flat last month. In contrast to his previous neighbors, new one was so intolerant because they play music loudly at midnight and talk in high volume.
In conclusion, neighbors must have some good behavior. This essay mentioned three major feature of suitable neighbor and explain them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...r for good neighbor. As mentioned above most of people live in crowded cities, so they need to...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'feature' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'features'.
Suggestion: features
...avior. This essay mentioned three major feature of suitable neighbor and explain them. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all, in contrast to, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75075987842 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47066285497 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562310030395 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9804777239 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.15 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324581604345 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102892400659 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854387483845 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206996458398 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062241660409 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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