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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: You
...ause of being amiable and open-hearted. You you will never get bored while talking to h...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...neighbor who is not a good one being the contrary of the persons, mentioned above...
^^
Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: one
...ove. I hate a neighbor being noicy. And one one my neighbors is, unfortunately, one of ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... my neighbors is, unfortunately, one of this persons. He is making a lot of noicy pa...
^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...but as for now it can't come true. However I have some good neighbors and I do val...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as for, i think, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55775577558 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93918802714 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49504950495 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7079510952 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7619047619 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190701702256 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780702904745 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535519541152 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124770188062 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396089726391 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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