Never never give up, means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree?
Life difficulties definitely come in different forms and shapes. They can be sweet or painful as well. No one in the world can scape some kind of difficulties, which will accompany us in a whole life. Indeed, success is one of the most important life goals for everyone but every mature human being has to admit that success will be a blank dream without difficulties. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether people should bend over backwards in order to be successful in their lives or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that success is one of the greatest and important life goals that every human being like to reach. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that although there are many trials and tribulations in daily life, vast majorities of people make an efforts to overcome those difficulties. Scientifically speaking, by and large, it is establish beyond doubt that every human being like to be successful not only in specific field but also in every single facet of their lives. For example, Thomas Edison never gave up in his career and his persistence and working long hour in laboratory provided an opportunity for him to become one of the significant inventor all around the world. Delving further into the issue reveal that every human being by nature like to keep trying and work hard in order to achieve their life goals. In fact, hardly ever do people lose their incentive and become hopeless. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that a plethora of people make plans for their future in order to be successful and they never stop working hard since reach their life goals. It goes without saying that they want to ensure their life through being diligent.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that people never stop in order to enhance their self-esteem. Broadly speaking, people all around the globe need to be confident and if they work hard and overcome obstacle they have this chance to boost their self-confidence. To put it in other word, people should keep trying and bend over backwards to reach their pinnacle of their life and work hard in order to be self-sufficient. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, many people are on the belief that they can be successful and reach their life goals through hard working. Indeed, in some case not only could not working hard be helpful but also could be waste of time. Actually, although keep trying can bring many benefits, people need to be intelligent and make a sound decision in order to be successful and achieve their life goals. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, people should work hard in order to be successful in their life. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that human being need to be successful in their everyday life and they can reach to this aim through hard working. In addition, if people make an effort and follow their life goals, they can improve their self-esteem and feel honored. I highly suggest that people should try hard in order to reach their goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an effort' or simply 'efforts'?
Suggestion: an effort; efforts
...ly life, vast majorities of people make an efforts to overcome those difficulties. Scienti...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'established'.
Suggestion: established
...tifically speaking, by and large, it is establish beyond doubt that every human being lik...
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Line 5, column 728, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...Indeed, in some case not only could not working hard be helpful but also could be waste...
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Line 7, column 453, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...try hard in order to reach their goals.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'by and large']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218553459119 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.172955974843 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0754716981132 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0691823899371 0.046263068375 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.064465408805 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12106918239 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0393081761006 0.0351676179071 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69177708926 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0424528301887 0.0309702414327 137% => OK
Particles: 0.00471698113208 0.00188951952338 250% => OK
Determiners: 0.0691823899371 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0251572327044 0.0209618222197 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00943396226415 0.0139019557991 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3447.0 2387.08602151 144% => OK
No of words: 586.0 408.028673835 144% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88225255973 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315699658703 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213310580205 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153583617747 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105802047782 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69177708926 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445392491468 0.524397521467 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.3448286768 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5384615385 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0571876214 48.84282405 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.576923077 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.576923076923 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 43.8695195589 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.2358974359 1.45489161554 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17269838216 0.300154397459 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0970451185864 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0557669889297 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484287093811 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146386489729 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671289607827 0.114077575197 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483095847486 0.0781384742642 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.582797130941 0.336927656856 173% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0659998258576 0.067059652881 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129867289095 0.210909579961 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515897283294 0.0618886996521 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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