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I still remember the day, when i stole money for the school admission fee from my parents pocket. Later, i told this to my parents and they get embaressed to the situation that they did not provide me money in required time. I agree with the statement that always telling truth is important in any relationship to stay longer. Not only to the family relation, it also help to maintain good relationship between friends, teacher and students.
Firstly, teliing truth always helps to maintain good relationship between parents and their children. When i was small and my teachers forced me to pay admission fee in time, i afraid to tell this to my parents. Because of my family problem-low income of my family , i didnot able to gather courage to get money. But due to the apprehension of the future, i was obligated to stole money from my father’s pocket, At this time, he immediately realized that, his first priority to help me in education. I told him all the incidence that where the money was gone. From that day my father becomes my most close friend and help me in every difficulties.
Secondly, it helps to make good relationship with friends. Once my friend name Hari was absent in class. That day teacher teach us very important lecture in class. He also suggest us to read that lecture carefully. He said that this will be asked in final exam. After the class, i immediately phone to Hari and provide him the material that has my teacher provided in class through mail. I encourage him to read it carefully. I can also lie to him and make him overconfiend to not read the material provided by the teacher in the sense of competition. But in the sense of friend, i did not tell him lie and help him. The question from this chapter was asked in the exam and my friend passed with good marks. He was very happy with me. That how we are able to maintain good relationship between us. When i asked certain help to him, he always praise my honesty and trustworthyness.
Finally, telling the real things helps to maintain good good relationship between political leader as well as public. I always remember the manifesto of CPN Maoist of Nepal- Political party. They prepared their grandiose plan to develop Nepal in first consistuent assembly. When they reached to the government they failed to do as they promised. That why many of the people who openly suppported them shifted to another party. Finally, Other win over them in second consistuent constituent assembly. This event clearly illustrate that , to get public favor for long time, every political party needs to maintain clear image and always needs to tell truth.
In sum, the relationship that is based on lie is very fragile. To have long lasting relationship with parents, friennds, or any political party to support public, they always need to tell truth. I recommend to tell truth in evey part of life. Though telling lie sometime have transisent benefit, for long term benefit, telling truth is mandatory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
I still remember the day, when i stole money for the school admission fe...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sion fee from my parents pocket. Later, i told this to my parents and they get em...
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Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ot only to the family relation, it also help to maintain good relationship between f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...between friends, teacher and students. Firstly, teliing truth always helps to...
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Suggestion: I
...etween parents and their children. When i was small and my teachers forced me to ...
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Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'i'm afraid'.
Suggestion: i'm afraid
...forced me to pay admission fee in time, i afraid to tell this to my parents. Because of ...
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...y family problem low income of my family , i didnot able to gather courage to get ...
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...d and help me in every difficulties. Secondly, it helps to make good relation...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to make good relationship with friends. Once my friend name Hari was absent in class...
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...am. After the class, i immediately phone to Hari and provide him the material tha...
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...aise my honesty and trustworthyness. Finally, telling the real things helps t...
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...shifted to another party. Finally, Other win over them in second consistuent cons...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Other) must be used with a third-person verb: 'wins'.
Suggestion: wins
...ed to another party. Finally, Other win over them in second consistuent constit...
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Suggestion: ,
...mbly. This event clearly illustrate that , to get public favor for long time, ever...
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Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend telling'.
Suggestion: recommend telling
...blic, they always need to tell truth. I recommend to tell truth in evey part of life. Though tell...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2474.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 520.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75769230769 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63361960099 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455769230769 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 757.8 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 27.0 9.59856630824 281% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 4.0 0.994623655914 402% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3470681233 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7647058824 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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