Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of new technologies, food has become easier to prepare than ever before. In my opinion, it brings both positive and negative influences on people’s lives.
In the first place, food that is easier to prepare has an obvious advantage for new generations, who are leading their lives in a more rapid pace. Fast-food restaurants such as McDonald’s exactly cater to our needs for a faster life. When I feel really hungry, traditional cooking is just too slowly. However, fast food can instantly improve my situation. As we save a large quantity of time previously used to prepare food, we can spend our time performing more important tasks, and therefore focus better on our work.
However, easier-to-prepare food also brings about some disadvantages to our lives.
Firstly, as we save more time focusing on work instead of food, we tend to feel more and more stressed out due to the busy cycle. Our already-too-fast life pace gets even speedier, which can bring about negative psychological problems in workers. On the contrary, traditional cooking style enables us to see the relaxing side of life, to stop and smell the roses. Also, cooking itself is sometimes a relaxing process to relieve pressure from workplaces. My mother loves to cook when she’s very tired after work, from which she can retrace the relaxation she needs.
Secondly, as food becomes easier to prepare, we gradually lose the right to enjoy top-class cooking. Because it does not cater to people’s needs for speed as well as fast foods does, and thus gradually decreases on the market. Many young people nowadays craze for Pizza Hut, but they have no idea how traditional home-made pizzas taste differently and wonderfully.
Another drawback of easy-to-prepare food is that in order to prepare food more easily, manufacturers add certain chemicals to the food which are not completely healthy for us. For instance, McDonald’s contains too much calories and too little vegetation, which will cause unbalance in people’s nutrition.
To sum up, food has become easier to prepare during the past decade or so. The change has brought both positive and negative influences on people’s lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 220, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... instance, McDonald's contains too much calories and too little vegetation, whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24649859944 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00010853818 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59943977591 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8458788543 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.65 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.85 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159297817462 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542044002295 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460839078365 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946166828336 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434779960978 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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