Nowadays many high schools and universities require students to work on projects in groups, and all members of the group receive the same grade (mark) on the project. Do you agree or disagree that giving every member of a group the same grade is a good way to evaluate students?
In the recent era, a lot of students want to be more specialized in order to get a proper job and to acquire high income. One of the best ways to learn knowledge and experience is an education in the university. Taking adjusted and the optional courses can develop knowledge about different students. Recently, almost of faculty assign one or some assignments or projects in order to catch and reinforce the knowledge of their student in the class. I definitely agree with this statement that students need to work in a group for doing a collaborative project. I feel this way for triple reasons that will elaborate the following paragraph.
In the beginning, this idea will be in incentive for students to do assigned roles and be responsible. In the word, the students forced to projects that maybe are required for their professional careers in the future. Sometimes, students postpone their assignments to the last minute and being lazy for doing that. while in a group project, the lazy one push to forward by another to doing some apart of the project. As I remember when I was an undergraduate student, For a presentation that me and my classmate assigned to prepare and represent in the class. I think it gives me a sense of responsibility and commitment to doing my task because of the of my friend's presence
Moreover, Doing an assignment or project gives the student a lot of knowledge and experience and broaden their horizon. Everyone should learn group working because at recent decads we definitely well-known that group working is the basic role of every successful company to lead their direction to goal. To put it another way, everyone has specific experience and insight when we gather these different ideas, experience to a pool, it will be caused to make comprehensive results. for example, some prestigious companies such as apple, IBM nd so on have a collection of manger, consultors, advisors to get a decisive decision.
in conclusion, for all of the reasons discussed I am strongly believing that a group working for a project can develop students regarding pragmatical experience, responsibility, knowledge, and so on. All of the consequences may be useful and prepare them for their career and personal living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'project'.
Suggestion: project
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Message: Wrong collocation. Did you mean 'apart from'?
Suggestion: apart from
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Suggestion: to group
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96542553191 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98490880399 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515957446809 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3248467738 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.823529412 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210388091619 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732413408676 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070452038312 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138922801324 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0099265041363 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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