Nowadays, many movies or films are based on books. Some people prefer to read the original book before they watch the movie, other prefer to watch the movie before reading the book. Which one do you prefer?
Watching movie is one of the best way to kill some time and relaxing. Although many prefer to read the story on the book and then watch films which are based on books, I on the other hand like to watch movies which are based on books first and then read the book. I will address the most discernible reasons in the following why I feel this way.
To begin with, in the books writers have a lot of time to tell readers about his story character and can create fantasy world, but in movies because of some limitations such as time and technical restriction, directre is not able to do that. Accordingly, when people read the book first they expectation increased and wanted to see exact scene in the movie, the result would be dissaponting. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Several years ago I have read famous book named Lord of the King. I noticed ten years ago, they wanted to produce that book film. However, I read the book and know the story but when it came to Cinama I went to see that. I expected to see the great war in fantasy world. Unfortunately, I was really dissapointed when watched that, because they manipulated some part of the story, because the lack of the technology advance and because of the time limitation.
Moreover, criousity is one of the reason that stimulate people watch movies to the end, in order to know the result of the movies. If someone know the story in advance I think there is no reasons remain for him to watch that not only that but also he may annoy others. To share personal experience. Last month my brother and I went to watched dead pool movie. My brother read the book before,thus he know the story. In the cinama he told me what happend next and went out the saloon to but things which was annoied others people and kill my exiting
In conclusion, it is for all the aforementioned reasons, I prefer to watch movies which are based on books first then read the book because of some limitations directors may manipulate story which is dissapointe audiance, and because people do not have the reasons to see the whole movie because they know what happen in the end.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...ow the result of the movies. If someone know the story in advance I think there is n...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no reasons'?
Suggestion: there are no reasons
...meone know the story in advance I think there is no reasons remain for him to watch that not only t...
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Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thus
...l movie. My brother read the book before,thus he know the story. In the cinama he tol...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...My brother read the book before,thus he know the story. In the cinama he told me wha...
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Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nnoied others people and kill my exiting In conclusion, it is for all the aforeme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, thus, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48461538462 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44145250523 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474358974359 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.978571122 48.9658058833 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9411764706 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414766177177 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117555681344 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124199287283 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287091635838 0.150856017488 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118534681727 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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