Nowadays, parents don't have the time to play with their children anymore. What activity should they ask the children to do during the period: have fun playing games/sports, or spend time with schoolwork?

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Nowadays, parents don't have the time to play with their children anymore. What activity should they ask the children to do during the period: have fun playing games/sports, or spend time with schoolwork?

It is true in my country that these days parents don't have much time for their children as previous generations and I think this happens to other countries too. One interesting question for this situation is that would you ask your children to have fun playing games, playing sports, or would you ask them to do schoolwork while you are working? Some may want their child doing homework. However, I would allow my kids to have fun for the following reasons.

First, children should enjoy their youth. Mostly, students have to spend time at least six to eight hours at school each day. They would...

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