It is true that the social situation of modern world makes both parents work and hence have less time for their children. Although some people think that parents should use this limited time to do things related to schoolwork, I believe they should use this time to have fun with their children. Playing strengthens parents and child relationship and helps both of them. Moreover, parents have the option to employ a tutor if their child needs help with schoolwork.
Playing sport and outside activities can play a positive effect on child and parents relation. Without it, children might feel lonely and unhappy. So the parents should use their limited time with utmost consideration. Being unhappy or feeling lonely can affect child's performance in school. For example, if a child feels lonely, he or she might not listen to the teacher lecture in class which finally results in low grades.
Similarly, parents can also benefit from playing with their children. After hours of working in office or company, it is reasonable that the children find them reluctant to help them with the schoolwork while playing sport outside or having fun is quite tempting for any person. So, parents will participate to be happier and energetic.
On the other hand, if the parents feel that their child needs help with the schoolwork, they should consider employing a tutor for their child because they can not offer their child a professional help and it may exacerbate the problem. Their time is limited but a child needs a sustainable help to progress in his or her schoolwork. Consider a situation where a child is weak in his mathematics and parents decide to spend their limited time to help him, first they should take some time to remember course material and then they start helping him. But a child who has an exam needs immediate help, he or she cannot wait until his or her parents be ready for help.
In sum, using limited time playing sport is a more profitable option for both children and their parents as I stated in previous lines. Nonetheless, parents are not specialized in every matter so they should put this responsibility to someone who is qualified.
- TPO-27 - Integrated Writing Task The little ice age was a period of unusually cold temperature in many parts of the world that lasted from about the year 1350 until 1900CE. There were unusually harsh winters, and glaciers grew larger in many areas. Scient 76
- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 70
- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 60
- Students aged 13 18 are taught different subjects by different teachers while younger students are taught by only one teacher all day long Some people suggest it would benefit young students to be taught by different teachers Do you agree with this view W 88
- TPO 41 - integrated writing 83
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, similarly, so, then, while, for example, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90217391304 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5359653069 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494565217391 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5298649626 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367339422816 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135947524297 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929946293698 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239917673185 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931603993393 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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