Nowadays, the world is developing at a very rapid pace and we are constantly forced to make a lot of choices that can affect the rest of our lives. Do you agree or disagree with the idea that should always ask someone else for help when we need to make an important decision? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
In this sophisticated world which we live in, every things change very fast and nobody can be up to date with them easily. It is so important for us to increase our information and data when we want to decied in a vital issue. While some people think that they could make any essential decisions by themeslves and not need to consult with experts, others disagree. In my view, we should take other professional ideas before making imoportant decission for two reasons, which I delve into in the following essay.
First, the more informatino and knowledge before making a dexission, the more chnace to achieve your goal and select the best option. Making a correct decission needs to know about many demanding aspects of diverse aspects of an issue, so to have a better chance you have to increase your insight. Since one of the best and easiest way to improve your knowledge is talking with an expert person, you should consider this notion. My experience is an interesting and convincing example of this. When I want to go university, I was hesitate to apply for universities in my country or abroad. Consulting with my parents and some of my older friends who they experienced abroad school ind help me to take a vivid picture of the situation. My parents gave me a perspective from an old view about the education besides an insight included parents which help me to consider the importance of family relationship, and my friends provided me a view about the progressive world where we need to educate well if we want be successful in our future. Considering all those suggestion helped me to take the best decission and apply for one of the best world class university in the U.S.
Second, some people have experinced some kind of experiences like what you want to make an essential decision about that, which will give you a practical and useful information and insight. Those real experiences not only give you the general information about the possible advantages and disadvantages of different options, but also help you to see the real results of those decission beforhand. For instance, when my fatehr wanted to make a business in our city. He started to converse with some of his friends who they already had businesses in different fields. After talking with them and considering the real situation of them he could reach a valuable real insight. Because some of his friends consults were different with the practical situations, knowing about their situation, help my father to consider the importance of speed of change in our daily life in this progressive world. Had he not consulted and considered thsoe actual positions, he xould not have made the best decision in is work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84815618221 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7258984134 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505422993492 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4998057495 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.166666667 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6111111111 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222476898856 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07416189738 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454244550442 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172404589194 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564635449971 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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