In order to get informed a person must get information from many news resources.Do you agree or disagree.u
Many people wonder if getting information from varieties of news media keeps them up to date. More importantly, I definitely refute that searching different news publications contributes to having a lot of information for two reasons, which I will develop in my body paragraphs.
To start with,checking through a myriad of news articles is time consuming, which eventually results in getting either obsolete or poor quality information.To be more specific, A preliminary study conducted by the national Information system at the University of Idaho shows that the intelligent ones are those who get information from a limited sources, and incorporate such news in their day to day activities.My own experience is an intelligent example of this.Four month ago, I attended an interview in other to get a managerial position.So before the test date I Have been combining a plethora of material from different sources in order to show my level of proficiency.When preparing with those numerous sources, I got overwhelmed such that i could not reminisce on them at the time of the interview. After then, I got to realise that those materials were no longer in use .With this I failed the test and also lost my self esteem. If I had stuck to a few sources, I would have been able to pinpoint on those articles and also be rest assured of getting the job.For this reason, it is certainly clear to see why one needs to stick to limited materials.
Furthermore,sorting different news sources brings about poor absorption rate which in turn results in not being informed.Drawing from my own experience, when my uncle was preparing for his PhD defence, he did many search thinking that he would be able to convince his professors.In Fact, he visited ten different sites in order to add up to his domain knowledge. But all his effort appeared futile because he ended up blathering during the presentation.This automatically cost him two more years because he was penalised by the judges for not giving an eloquent presentation.Had it been he limited his search, he wouldn't have been in quandary because he will be able to retain the little information he has.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I terribly disagree that sorting different news sites makes one intelligent.This is because too many news articles appear to be old fashioned, and because it results in low ability to retain information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, in fact, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05793450882 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21166691262 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551637279597 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.1344086022 243% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.800632929 48.9658058833 435% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.0 100.406767564 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.625 20.6045352989 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.5376344086 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196899386121 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985085824119 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914242781645 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135422319001 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718194141051 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 11.7677419355 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 58.1214874552 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.1575268817 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 10.002688172 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.0537634409 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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