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...riad of news articles is time consuming, which eventually results in getting eith...
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...er obsolete or poor quality information.To be more specific, A preliminary study c...
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...ucted by the national Information system at the University of Idaho shows that t...
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...m at the University of Idaho shows that the intelligent ones are those who get i...
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...n order to show my level of proficiency.When preparing with those numerous sources, ...
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...ould have been able to pinpoint on those articles and also be rest assured of ge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, in fact, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05793450882 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21166691262 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551637279597 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.1344086022 243% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.800632929 48.9658058833 435% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.0 100.406767564 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.625 20.6045352989 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.5376344086 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196899386121 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985085824119 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914242781645 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135422319001 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718194141051 0.0645574589148 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 11.7677419355 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 58.1214874552 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.1575268817 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 10.002688172 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.0537634409 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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