It is obvious that in today's fast-paced world, human beings are very busy doing their task for the purpose of earning their living and achieving their other goals in their life. In order to be more successful in their activity, they need to pay a lot of attention for their health. This way, they can follow various methods including eating healthier food, doing exercise, playing sport, and so on. One of the most important activities which help people to be physically and mentally healthier is exercising individually or in a group. I believe that it is much beneficial for people to take part in group exercise instead of exercising individually. In the following paragraphs I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
To begin with, in order to be healthy, it is better for people to participate in group exercises. It will give them a good opportunity to make new friends. When people exercise alone, they cannot communicate with others; thus, they are not capable of finding a new friend. Through doing exercise in a team, they can develop their social relationships which has significant effects in their life. For example, I play in a basketball team, and it has assisted me to become familiar with new good friends, while I have no friend before I take part in this group activity. These friends help me to learn skills better; also, they aid me to solve my other personal matters. If I did exercise alone, I would not be able to find these friends.
Secondly, I believe that doing exercise in a team not only gives people a good chance to find new friend and develop their social relations but also enables them to improve other skills such as taking responsibility, teamwork skills and so forth. In order to be achieve the same aim in ad team sport, it is essential that all members of the group take their responsibility for doing their duty efficiently. As a result, they will enhance a lot of skills when playing in a team; whereas, these abilities cannot be fulfilled by doing exercise individually. For instance, one of my friends could not act effectively in team projects in school. When he participated in team sports, he could overcome his weakness. Consequently, he is an active member of group projects in school.
To sum up, according to the points and examples mentioned above, people can take advantage of doing exercise in a team. Hence, it is much better for them to play in a team then individually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77122641509 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74076392459 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492924528302 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1308000776 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1904761905 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233178070952 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778018556679 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660786035368 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155541002302 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141148168766 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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