It is obvious in today's fast-paced world, people are trying and working hard in order to earing their living and achieve their goals in their lives. In order to have enough energy to concentrate better on their tasks, they need to spend part of their time relaxing them. People based on their situation, consider various activities to reach this goal. I strongly believe that it is much better for people to relax by doing physical exercise to relax than watching a movie or reading a book. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my view using some reasons and example.
To begin with, I think one of the best ways to relax is that individuals do physical exercise. It will help them to not only relieve their stress and tiredness but also be physically healthier. In other words, by doing exercise, they will be able to be mentally and bodily healthier. When people read books or watch a movie, they must sit and do not have any physical activities. Thus, it will cause them to suffer from some disease such as obesity. This way, it is much useful for them to choose to do sport and exercise instead of doing other activities. For instance, I assign my free time doing exercise, or whenever I feel stress or tired, I prefer to play sport. It will lead me to feel relaxed and comfortable and to have sufficient energy to carry out my other duties. Also, it would help to reduce my weight; hence, it has had positive effects on my spirit and has increases my spirit.
Secondly, I believe that when people get involved in doing activities such as playing sport or doing exercise, it will give them a good opportunity to improve their social relationships. When they read books or watch movies, they usually do these activities alone; therefore, they do not have a chance of communicating with others. In my view, through doing exercise, people can make new friends and develop their relations. Also, they can enhance other skills including teamwork skills, taking responsibility, and so on. For example, I do exercise in a park near my house and found a good friend which has interests and goals similar to me, He helps me to improve my English language.
To sum up, according to the points and examples mentioned above, it is much beneficial for people to take part in physical activities and take advantage of doing exercise. It will help me to be physically and emotionally healthier and improve their social relations as well.
- which one do you prefer? Why?1) a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or2) another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days. 66
- which one do you prefer? Why?1) a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or2) another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days. 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work. 70
- In order to stay healthy, many people choose to exercise. Some people tend to exercise individually such as running and riding bicycles, etc. Some people tend to participate in group exercises such as team sports. Which one do you prefer and why? 70
- Imagine that you are planning to take a vacation and are trying to decide between two places to visit. Which of these two options do you believe would give you better information about making your choice? Why?۱٫ Reading about the places online۲٫ Discu 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, in my view, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73943661972 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5875839313 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504694835681 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1446773896 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1428571429 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278686124349 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943349792994 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112202053358 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175078374242 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479244972882 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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