Parents are the best teachers. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the heavy burdens on the shoulder of parents is raising children who are well adjusted in the society, away from all prevailing anomalities. To achieve this aim, they motivate their children to experience trials and tribulations of their life. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether parents are the best teacher or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that parents are not enough able to teach their children in order to enter the society. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that although parents play a pivotal role in children's lives, they do not have enough experiences to help their children. Scientifically speaking, parents are not informed of modern teaching methods and therefore use antiquated and ineffective methods to educate their children. In fact, nowadays technology has changed and the amount of knowledge that parents have, not only are obsolete but also are not proper in order to educate children. Delving further into the issue reveals that children should be provided with the best and up to date facilities because in today's hectic world children face many obstacles, which need someone to teach them how to defeat them. Indeed, hardly ever can children progress and enhance their knowledge if they do not to be taught with learned and proficiency people. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country; show that children who have been educated by their parents confront myriads of trials and tribulations in their future life rather than other who take advantages of experienced people.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that parents are not strict enough to their children. Broadly speaking, parents are biased when it comes to their own children. Actually, not only do parent teach their children appropriately and ineffectively but also, they think their children are unique. To put it in other word, enthusiastic parents will not provide an opportunity in order to find their children's' weaknesses. In fact, they prevent children from maturation. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, parents can educate their children in a way that enter the society successfully because not only they love their children but also wish them the best future. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, parents do not posses specific characters in order to be the best teacher. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that parents are not enough experienced in order to educate their children. Additionally, due to emotional feeling of parents hardly ever can children progress in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er can children progress in their life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'broadly speaking', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208015267176 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.185114503817 0.158761421928 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0725190839695 0.0866891130778 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.104961832061 0.046263068375 227% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0667938931298 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0992366412214 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0477099236641 0.0351676179071 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87251370661 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.043893129771 0.0309702414327 142% => OK
Particles: 0.00190839694656 0.00188951952338 101% => OK
Determiners: 0.0610687022901 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.013358778626 0.0209618222197 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0190839694656 0.0139019557991 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2979.0 2387.08602151 125% => OK
No of words: 477.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24528301887 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398322851153 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.331236897275 0.251872472559 132% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215932914046 0.174417080927 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129979035639 0.112833075102 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87251370661 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505241090147 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 58.7455993939 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6818181818 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1196608373 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.409090909 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6818181818 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 54.8055079093 45.7405998639 120% => OK
Elegance: 0.994652406417 1.45489161554 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178049287649 0.300154397459 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0880123783581 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0487440959232 0.0752933317313 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49859534973 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129488866655 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079588653474 0.114077575197 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058151320544 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.522919953681 0.336927656856 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0292345176336 0.067059652881 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152729814023 0.210909579961 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327061687277 0.0618886996521 53% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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