Parents are the best teachers. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific examples and details to support your response.
It is a well-known fact that parents are the first teachers in our lives. They teach us to walk, to speak and develop good manners before we make our way to the real world. Parents are involved in the development and education of their children throughout their lives. Even the most professional teachers aren’t that much involved as the parents are.
At the initial stages of our life which corresponds to our childhood, parents are deeply committed and involved in teaching their children. Often, they wish to make sacrifices on their part for the betterment of their children. They love their children a lot and have the utmost patience while passing down knowledge to their children. They wish success for their children and never involve in teaching their children bad things. In fact, most of the implicit learning occurs when children unconsciously imitate the habits and behavior patterns of their parents.
During the later stages of our life during adulthood, parents are arduously involved in offering advice which most of the children might not accept initially. At this stage, children consider their close friends to be their teacher. Most of the times adolescents are notoriously rebellious and may automatically reject the advice their parent offer. For instance, my marriage which was an inter-caste one was solely against the beliefs and traditions of my parents. My parents were against this marriage at the beginning but later became flexible with their beliefs and supported my decision. So, being a teacher of an adolescent is much more complicated and many parents fail to be a good teacher for their grown-up children.
However, parents are not professional teachers and sometimes, tend to be prejudiced by the love of their children. In many cases, parents only present one viewpoint of the world to their children whereas good teaching is based on different attitudes. So, wishing good things for children and offering an easy life may prevent maturation of their children. Therefore, attending a school and learning from teachers offers a broader perspective which our parents can’t offer. In addition, once our parents get older, they become more conservative and are not open-minded with the latest trends and fashion. So, we need to be cautious while taking advice during that period. But, the kind of intuition they possess and the love they cherish always makes them the best advisers any time.
In conclusion, while parents are not the ideal teachers and children generally need a great diversity of teachers in their lives in order to get a more accurate view of the world. But, parents are the most committed of all teachers and have the greatest emotional investment in their children’s future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2314.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18834080717 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69787874813 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468609865471 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5490897521 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0601940207514 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248162420519 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233961512318 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438920973434 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019417307258 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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