Parents do not understand their children as well as they understood their children 50 years ago.
We all live in a rapidly changing world and these days gigantic companies which work on high-tech devices provide people across the globe with new invention every year and previous technologies don't last very long. It seems this acceleration in changes of technology have impacted people themselves to and people work nonstop and they always seem to be in a hurry and that's why people, especially young adults, change fast and it makes it difficult for older people to understand them. Germane to this fast, a question that is matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether parents have good understanding of their children like previous decades or not. Although some people might have a good comprehension of their children, but I'm personally on the conviction that parents can't get closed and intimate to their children, so they can't understand them like before.
One compelling reason deserving to be mentioned is that nowadays children are more influenced by internet and television rather than their parents. 50 years ago the world of the kids were very small and they could communicate only with their parents and their neighbors who obviously had a lot of same opinions and they were raising with that manner which was very similar to their parents, so parents could understand the needs and emotions of their kids quite easily. In contrast, these days every young adult has a smartphone or a laptop computer so they can comfortably use the internet or social networks and they are very much under influence of internet trends and their attitudes and thoughts takes shape outside of their homes and their parents are unaware of those new thoughts. Consequently it's too difficult for them to comprehend their children and their new lifestyle and they don’t know how to handle their children in hard situations.
Another point which is equally important, if not more, is that travelling has become so easy all across the worlds and therefore many children move away to other cities for studying or continuing their career. As a result, this physical distance between parents and children can lead to a cultural gap between them, because children will get to know other people, and other cultures and that can make it very tough for the parents to understand the new way their children think and behave. However, it should also be pointed that some parents try to keep themselves up-to-dated with new generation and they try to figure out their children's requirements, physically and mentally, and have good relationship with them. But these parents also sometimes can have a common understanding with their children because there a lot of new stuff which are exclusive for new generation and parents can understand why even if they try their best.
The world is changing in very high pace and so is the generations and the differences between generations becomes more and more and it makes a hard work for the parents to comprehend their children. With respect to all parents who raise their kids and try to provide their kids with best emotional support, I, personally, claim that parents can't understand their children like preceding decades.
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: Consequently,
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Suggestion: with the best
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'in contrast', 'as a result', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213523131673 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.14590747331 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0960854092527 0.0866891130778 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0658362989324 0.046263068375 142% => OK
Pronouns: 0.085409252669 0.0685040099705 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108540925267 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0231316725979 0.0351676179071 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65179223708 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0320284697509 0.0309702414327 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0017793594306 0.00188951952338 94% => OK
Determiners: 0.076512455516 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.017793594306 0.0209618222197 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017793594306 0.0139019557991 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3165.0 2387.08602151 133% => OK
No of words: 524.0 408.028673835 128% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04007633588 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330152671756 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284351145038 0.251872472559 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198473282443 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125954198473 0.112833075102 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65179223708 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477099236641 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.0517233513 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 37.4285714286 20.5533526081 182% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 51.780787943 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 226.071428571 120.699889404 187% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.4285714286 20.5533526081 182% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.644075263715 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 65.8636859324 45.7405998639 144% => OK
Elegance: 1.16167664671 1.45489161554 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273471070197 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133347634537 0.103427244359 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0552175137309 0.0752933317313 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600564243958 0.497263757937 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116460002945 0.151897553556 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140458768721 0.114077575197 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769003198107 0.0781384742642 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.496713051632 0.336927656856 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0423965253309 0.067059652881 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203162722301 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465370634981 0.0618886996521 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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