parents should decide about the future of children, agree or disagree?
if parents should decide about the future of children, agree or disagree?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that with the dawn of human civilization, parents have thrived to build stronger relationships with their children. Vividly, education is of paramount importance in children's lives. There are different schools of thought among people on whether it's worthwhile to give the decision of choosing a career on children's hand or parents should take lead to decide that about them. If I were asked, I would agree with the notion that parents should decide about the future of their children. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first reason corroborating my stance is associated with the notion that that parents are more mature and experienced, so they deliberately make a plan that will result in a productive outcome. Since parents have experienced the same situation in their lives and overcome that they knew how to tackle the situation and their solution is always fruitful in the long run. My opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own example. Five years ago, when I finished high school and considering getting admission to a college. I was extremely perplexed that made me sick. My dad got to know about my problem, and he helped me chose a pharmacy career. He explained that he had gone through the same situation when he had to decide, and my grandparents helped him then. NOt only his decision was right for me at that time, but it also helped me get a job last year. As soon as I graduated, I was hired by one of his friend's companies. The reality was he helped me to chose pharmacy after carefully considering all aspects and knowing that I would not have any problem in my job search.
The Second compelling rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that parents know their children's interests better. Knowing that knowledge is enough to make righteous decisions. It is obvious that children spend most of their time at their home and with their families, hence, their parents and family members know their weaknesses and strengths. By the way of illustration. Last year, my cousin has to decide about his college for graduation. He was confused about whether to chose the medical field or engineering professions. His dad helped him to reach the final decision knowing that he took interest in maths and physics and biology was not his area of interest, his dad chose engineering for him. Last weekend, when I met him at a family gathering he was immensely pleased with his decision of selecting his career. My example clearly manifests that parents make the best decision for their children because they know them well.
By perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer that parents' decisions in the career selection of their children are always right. For the sake of brevity, few points are worth reiterating. First, parents are more experienced, and their decision will be helpful for children. Second, parents know their children better and, hence could determine the right career for them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
if parents should decide about the future ...
^^
Line 4, column 565, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to engineer'.
Suggestion: to engineer
...est in maths and physics, his dad chose engineering for him. Last weekend, when I met him a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, well, while, as to, by and large, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2480.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91089108911 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65189550134 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49504950495 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0065365043 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0357142857 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28268494008 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100346764475 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204228385762 0.0737576698707 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335870721666 0.150856017488 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.353759172372 0.0645574589148 548% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
if parents should decide about the future ...
^^
Line 4, column 565, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to engineer'.
Suggestion: to engineer
...est in maths and physics, his dad chose engineering for him. Last weekend, when I met him a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, well, while, as to, by and large, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2480.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91089108911 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65189550134 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49504950495 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0065365043 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0357142857 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28268494008 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100346764475 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204228385762 0.0737576698707 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335870721666 0.150856017488 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.353759172372 0.0645574589148 548% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.