Parents today are more involved in their children’s education. Do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Education
education has played a prevailing role in every i...
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Suggestion: Children&apos
...g role in every individual's life. children's training has a direct relation with t...
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Suggestion:
...gh some might believe that parents today are not more engage in their children&ap...
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... delve into the most important reasons. First, parents are more cognizant rather...
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Suggestion: Because
...ve about their children's studies. because in today's lifestyle level of lite...
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Suggestion:
...s lifestyle level of literacy of parents increased and they ease the path for fur...
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...ring the performance of them carefully. Second, nowadays parents have less child...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun children is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ly. Second, nowadays parents have less children that result in they spend more...
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...e more training opportunities for them. In conclusion, I really believe that tod...
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Suggestion: Because
...ssist more their children in schooling. because they are more knowledgeable and have fe...
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Suggestion:
...e more knowledgeable and have fewer kids than the past and therefore they have m...
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...e and have fewer kids than the past and therefore they have more time and energy...
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Suggestion: That
...educational progress of their children. that is why I think nowadays parents are mor...
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...gage in their children's teaching.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 221.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52036199095 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10975299112 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542986425339 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.588005525 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406242807588 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184905347637 0.076458572812 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104000151332 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275026482353 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609980507088 0.0645574589148 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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