It is less important for families today to gather and eat. Do you agree or disagree?
We had many costums which have been changed during the time and it is bacause of various reasons . Some of this traditional costums are constitsent since they are interesting for nowaday individuals. One of our traditional habits is the fact that families gather together and eat their meals and make a great warm circummestance and enjoy their foods. Some people hold an opinion that this manner has been removed from our families’ routine, however others believe that it is not eliminated and people still like to assemble together to eat their meals. Personally, I believe in first point of view.among nomerous reasons, which can vindicate my viewpoint, I will mention the two most conspicuous ones through the following pragraphes.
The first reason that juts out of my mind immediately pondering this issue is the fact that these days people are always in hurry and advent of technology makes individuales life more stressful, they have to work harder and more. For example, in the past folks have more time, they had weekends and vacation,nevertheless, nowadays people most of the time ought to work even at the weekends. These rush life prevent persons to join together like the past. It is not good at all because each of us needs to be in family’s cozy atmospher it will help us to improve our emotional feelings but unfortunately the situation makes us to be like this. There is an article which established in a science magazine that said according to a research on a milion employees, %50 of them eat their meals on a train,cummuting between their home and office. Is it really good to change those great meetings with family with eating our daily meals on a train alone?
Secondly, these days we have great veriety in meals; While some elder persons like traditional food, younger individuales like fast foods, and it makes it hard for people to gather together to eat their meals. In the past there are few kind of foods I remember my father told me when he was kid, there were limited foods for their daily meals. For example he mentioned that they ate Abgoosht, which is a persian traditional food consist of meat, potato, onion, and some other ingrediants, every Friday and whole family even their uncles and aunts gathered together and served this delicious food together and he added that it was great atmosphere when you enjoy your food with whole family. But now, in my case, we can not get to the common point in our own family to eat what for lunch and dinner and most of the time we order food from resturan cause of different interests. It shows that at the present time it is hard to assemble whole family and even it is harder to cook a meal which is delicious for all.
To make long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, we may draw the conclusion that these days families eat their meals seperately which is in the contrast to the past time, and it is because of some legical reasons but in my opinion we can manage our job and our time to spend more time with our family especialy in the meal time to gather and enjoy our food with our family it has great benefits for our soul and it will help us to be happier person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2621.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 561.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67201426025 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62044795946 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458110516934 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 821.7 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.119301456 48.9658058833 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.176470588 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.6045352989 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143200985238 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518929244229 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382244153202 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989465450657 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287025385945 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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