parents today are more involved in their children's education than were in the past
Undoubtedly, education has a significant role in human life. People want to be successfull in life and education is an important way to achieve prosperous. Parents are best teacher for their children and their love and tie to their children lead them to involve in their children education as well as other things. Personally, I rather agree with the statement and based on my own experience I will discuss reasons and examples in the following paragraphs.
First, recently the number of well-educated parents is more than parents who lived in the past. There is no doubt that education level of parents is important factor for children's success. The parents who have academic education are more involved in their children education and these cause children to be more successful, although the methods of involving and approach of parents might be different, the best way to help to children is knowing children talents and interests. However, the importance of children education can be helpful for children's futures. In our country there is a national exam that students have to take this exam after high school to accepting into university. Always the children, who their parent are teacher, are successful in the exam and they accept into best universities and this can show relation between parent involvement and children success
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...tant way to achieve prosperous. Parents are best teacher for their children and their lo...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knows'
Suggestion: knows
...erent, the best way to help to children is knowing children talents and interests. However...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...erent, the best way to help to children is knowing children talents and interests. However...
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Line 3, column 699, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...gh school to accepting into university. Always the children, who their parent are teac...
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Line 3, column 793, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'into the best'.
Suggestion: into the best
... successful in the exam and they accept into best universities and this can show relation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 407.700716846 54% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73004026247 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6897918325 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474473182985 0.236089414692 201% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181541412348 0.076458572812 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137679031484 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.36204864376 0.150856017488 240% => Less paragraph_topic_similarity_mean wanted.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940405432173 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 53.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 16.0 Out of 30
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