Part-time job is beneficial for young people. Do you agree or disagree with the statement. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The debate on whether or not advantages of part-time works outweigh their potential disadvantages has long been a controversial one. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration to look at the constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Some people posit young adults can learn a lot from their part-time jobs. On the other hand, some others take an opposite side and disagree. From my vantage point, I concur with the former group and aver that working part times will prove to be substantially beneficial for many reasons.
The first exquisite point to be considered is that these jobs are an important source of supplementary income. Money is an obvious concern for adults either for paying college fee or for spending on essential resources. In addition to lack of proper credentials and expertise, these jobs are the best option available for earning cash. A vivid example which can be given to shed light on the subject is one of my own experience. Belonging to a middle class family, the only way I could afford my college education was by taking a part time shift in a local fast food chain. Though the money was not huge, but still it was enough to cover up my living cost so that my family could afford my college charges.
Secondly, another reason which deserves some words to say is that being employed in proper place will certainly make it easy for the future. Let's recall a personal experience of my roomate. While I was working in the fast food restaurant, he luckily got hired in a paid internship position at a leading IT company. For him, this gig was not only a source of income but also a possible linkage for his dream job of being an IT engineer. He garnered as much knowledge and links as possible about the IT world from this part-time job and eventually was hired in a leading IT firm as soon as he graduated. THis experience taught me the non-monetary worth of being engaged part-time.
Lastly, although the aforementioned reasons are the first one which cross the mind at first glance, they are by no means the only reason available. In fact there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. Having a part-time job teaches us vital life skills like self-dependency and financial savings. To be more specific, with the advent of salaries comes the responsibility of managing those resources in a wise and fruitful way. We do not have the luxury of spending our salaries prodigiously on extravagant resources. Inevitably, we learn the skills of financial managements and frugality. Moreover, as we start to sustain our self we have the confidence of being independent on other task as well.
To wrap it up, contemplating all foresaid reasons, one can soon realize the possible benefits one can accrue by taking up a port-time job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in addition, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82340862423 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78569018802 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562628336756 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5024824419 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.96 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.48 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165148847911 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442404301323 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404120252085 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886456160876 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288722600715 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.