In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Nowadays, there is the intense competition between people who want to be successful in their jobs and lives. For this fact, if they try hard and get enough information about their abilities and the condition of the society, they will be happy and satisfied and do not face the stress during their lives. Many people deem that a long time ago people have an easier ways to recognize what kind of job would help them to have successful lives in the future. On the other hand, other people hold an opposite view that today people can identify this issue easier than the past. Although not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelming, I agree with people who believe that today we can detect this issue easily. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To begin with, the first important point to be mentioned is that it is believed that the education is an open corridor to be success in the life by everyone. Due to this fact, students study hard in the school and they improve their abilities and this condition helps them to choose their career with knowledge. In addition, the advance in the technology helps students to know about the new things in the world and use them to be successful. For example, the young generation is very active in the social networks to meet different people through the world and they can take advantage in various aspects of their lives.
Second, there is another reason which deserves some words. Nowadays, parents have one or two children so that they have enough time and money for them. Thus, they provide unlike things for children like good school and university, psychological experts to guide their children to choose a great way in their lives. For this reason, I strongly believe that children can find their jobs easier that the past.
However, it might not always hold true. No one could not omit the fact in the past, the society was not complex and people easily understood the different aspect of society so that they could choose a secure job for themselves.
All main points considered, it appears to be good to draw a reasonable conclusion that I insist that today people can choose the best career in a simple method. Not only can education makes a great condition but also families are more aware and help young people to have a wonderful lives in the future.
- It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job. 70
- In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. 76
- Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. 60
- the mass extinction 66
- For the successful development of a country it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children five to ten years old than to spend money on universities 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 284, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
...d help young people to have a wonderful lives in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, thus, for example, in addition, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76385542169 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44139793236 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498795180723 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6868768611 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0555555556 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130921459088 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415484581537 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568181317549 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693069485926 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388838649671 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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