Nowadays, we have entered a brand-new era and everthing has changed a lot comparing to they used to be. Recently, an increasing number of people are concerned about the debate on whether in the past time, identifying if a job would lead to a successful and secure life or not was much easier than in the modern society. Some argue that the variety of jobs increased as time went by, so that they find it more difficult to identify a job nowadays. However, from my personal perspective, I shall lay my preference of standpoint on that it is true that identifying what kind of job will lead to a successful life is such less difficult than in the past. The reansons are as follows.
Firstly, people have gained a great amount of experience about jobs from the past, so we’ve catelog some of the jobs. To start with, one may never know starting a business can field out a large amount of money if one have no idea of any examples relating to this. For example, only after one hearing that a businessman became rich, can he get to know the fact that running a business is a way towards success. Also, by the past experience that the teacher’s salary is stable and they are able to enjoy the vacations every year, people get to know that being a teacher can also lead to a happy and secure, stable life. Thanks to the past experience, we are able to identify the job without try it by ourselves, which is time-consuming and of a high risk. Above all, it is essential for us modern people to rely on the past experience to identify if the job or career can lead to a successful future or not.
What’s more, thanks to the development of technology, we are able to search for the job information on the Internet to get the whole information about a certain type of work. For example, if we enter a website of a company, there might be some comments and information about it from other people, such as the salary and the holiday. By searching the information of that kind of job, it is not difficult for us to determine if the job can lead to a secure and successful life in the future. For example, when I was looking for a job, I entered a site of a clothing company. After seeing some information about the working environment and the comment of others who have been working in that company, I determined not to work in the company since it’s not suitable for me.
Admittedly, the job condition nowadays have been too complicated for people to identify elaborately, since as the development of the society, more and more new kinds of jobs come into being and sometimes we have problem identifying those new jobs. However, we can use the advanced technology, such as the databases, to compare the new job to similar ones in the past, and get a integrated knowledge of it. Thus, speculating the identification might be possible.
Above all, after analyzing all the pros and cons from different perspective, we may now, are able to reach the conclusion that, it is easier to identify if the job or career can lead to a successful or secure life.
- 21.Younger school children (aged five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 83
- Telephone has greater effect on people’s lives than television has 73
- In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. 73
- TOEFL TPO 30 - Integrated Writing Task 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...rned about the debate on whether in the past time, identifying if a job would lead to a s...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...bs from the past, so we've catelog some of the jobs. To start with, one may never know...
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Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... is a way towards success. Also, by the past experience that the teacher's salary is stabl...
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Line 2, column 643, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... and secure, stable life. Thanks to the past experience, we are able to identify the job withou...
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Line 2, column 828, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ial for us modern people to rely on the past experience to identify if the job or career can le...
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Line 4, column 378, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ob to similar ones in the past, and get a integrated knowledge of it. Thus, specu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, thus, for example, kind of, such as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2508.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 553.0 407.700716846 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53526220615 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74142122362 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437613019892 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.9 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9010701171 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.4 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.65 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324756388205 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958905399791 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890584515132 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179671003324 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662222079402 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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