I agree with statements says that people are never satisfied with what they are having, it human tendency that we are not stop our searching for comfortable life even though we are more comfortable at present. We always looks for further sophisticated life style because our desires endless.
Firstly, we are human being we have lots of desire in our mind. For example, if, I having walking on the road with out car then I will have desire by car, but once I satisfied this desire, do you think am I going stop looking further progression? The answer is no, if this done then i look for further more sophisticated life style like try to get private jet or air plane. This is what will happens to every human beings because we are made up desire and everyone of us, don't have the tendency of enough or sufficient. Only few people can be like that, for example those who are meditating, those are doing social services and those who are in ritual practice, they may have the self sufficiency attitudes remaining all of us do not have that much self control.
Secondly, even though we believe that those are practice ritual activities they have very good self control, on other words they are have very less desire still some them going from their right path. For example Swami Raghava was very ritual man but still because of more controllable desire he became addicted to saving more money, properties, and bad bad habit having sexual affair with working staff and personal assistance which illegal according to ritual rules, they are not supposed to perform such kind of activities. Moreover, They are supposed to perform bachelor life style and they should be role model to the human beings. Even though they everything about the life and away from the material life, still the inborn desires push the human to do the such kind of activities. This never going stop untill the human race are in the universe.
Thirdly, To support my statements even I give the biblical evidence. God told Eve not to eat the prohibited fruit but still because she was human being her desire never stopped her searching for more satisfied life style. And the result we are human being suffering for ancestor's action which against the god's will.
Finally, Because we are human being we never and ever the tendency of enough oneself this ever sending process it has it own consequences like good and bad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'We' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
... more comfortable at present. We always looks for further sophisticated life style be...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...of desire in our mind. For example, if, I having walking on the road with out car...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...ample, if, I having walking on the road with out car then I will have desire by car, bu...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng walking on the road with out car then I will have desire by car, but once I sa...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...on? The answer is no, if this done then i look for further more sophisticated lif...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...ate jet or air plane. This is what will happens to every human beings because we are ma...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...man beings because we are made up desire and everyone of us, dont have the tenden...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...are made up desire and everyone of us, dont have the tendency of enough or sufficie...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...d self control, on other words they are have very less desire still some them going ...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...going from their right path. For example Swami Raghava was very ritual man but s...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r right path. For example Swami Raghava was very ritual man but still because of...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: bad
...d to saving more money, properties, and bad bad habit having sexual affair with working...
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Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egal according to ritual rules, they are not supposed to perform such kind of act...
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Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
...elf this ever sending process it has it own consequences like good and bad. ...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it own consequences like good and bad.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'for example', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192052980132 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.17880794702 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116997792494 0.0866891130778 135% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0860927152318 0.046263068375 186% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0883002207506 0.0685040099705 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.105960264901 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0618101545254 0.0351676179071 176% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35072668719 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220750551876 0.0309702414327 71% => OK
Particles: 0.00441501103753 0.00188951952338 234% => OK
Determiners: 0.0684326710817 0.0887237588012 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0132450331126 0.0209618222197 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132450331126 0.0139019557991 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2412.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 417.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78417266187 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292565947242 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20623501199 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.131894484412 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0815347721823 0.112833075102 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35072668719 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505995203837 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.3929321765 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0625 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4982269281 48.84282405 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.75 120.699889404 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0625 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 0.644075263715 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.686001199 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.01875 1.45489161554 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245506116 0.300154397459 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.14899092455 0.103427244359 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686989486968 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552181203562 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173081755002 0.151897553556 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877035569403 0.114077575197 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753725806835 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.302629134051 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0802539875659 0.067059652881 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144926596509 0.210909579961 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852059098498 0.0618886996521 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.