Today education is really the most parts of the life of people after graduation from the school , by choosing attending to the university they create their future . people goes university for many reasons ,in my view on of the most important reasons for attending to college is preparation for future career , in this essay I will explain my reasons .
First of all , students learn individual and specific expertise which is related to their future career . in the high school students learn just public education which they need to daily life ,although they are necessary , they aren’t enough to do their job . for example for being civil engineering you should learn specific knowledge about mathematic ,static ,physics which you should not to know when you want to be an artist ,take me another example ,in high-school you have to learn accounting that is very essential to daily life like shopping but if you just know accounting you can’t being engineering .
Second ,studying at university is a good previlage to finding better job . Today companies look for people who has obtained the graduated degree , they consider the degree of university to employ their staffs . for example if you have the master degree you have better chance to gain a jab than once who has bachelor degree .
Finally , a person who study at university ,he/she has more money in their account . students at high school try to gain the scholarship for universities , they found out the successful people who have the highest salary ,they study at university , they know for being honored you must have the good job ,for having good job you must have specific expertise and for practice expertise you must study at university , for example ,professor samiei ,an iraninan brain surgeries is admired and honored among universe , he paid around 200 thousand $ per year .
To sum up , studying at university is turning point in the life of any person ,that’s make your future career , future statute and might be to help you are being one of the richest person in the world.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'first of all', 'in my view', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23273657289 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.184143222506 0.158761421928 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.079283887468 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0255754475703 0.046263068375 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.079283887468 0.0685040099705 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115089514066 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0511508951407 0.0351676179071 145% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60284931276 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0383631713555 0.0309702414327 124% => OK
Particles: 0.00511508951407 0.00188951952338 271% => OK
Determiners: 0.0639386189258 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204603580563 0.0209618222197 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0230179028133 0.0139019557991 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2079.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 365.0 408.028673835 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69589041096 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334246575342 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221917808219 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158904109589 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112328767123 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60284931276 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479452054795 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.2439497387 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6684587814 53% => OK
Sentence length: 33.1818181818 20.5533526081 161% => OK
Sentence length SD: 116.483319134 48.84282405 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.0 120.699889404 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1818181818 20.5533526081 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 0.644075263715 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.54480286738 794% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.3735990037 45.7405998639 121% => OK
Elegance: 1.38053097345 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24539795974 0.300154397459 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141795644764 0.103427244359 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.07645948005 0.0752933317313 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.658934575734 0.497263757937 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.212829759193 0.151897553556 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109410806532 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742866371352 0.0781384742642 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.249273199192 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0646544764555 0.067059652881 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151828107132 0.210909579961 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458505692904 0.0618886996521 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.