People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences,
career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Universities have tremendous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and intangible way. It is utterly important to appreciate their roles because of indelible impact on the people’s life pattern, knowledge, and performance. Although some people hold the viewpoint that it is not momentous to attend college or universities because of their higher tuition which affects both the students and their families’ budgets. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal and actual observation of life which has led me to agree with the idea that the main reason for attending universities is to be prepared for career which surely will affects your life’s path. In the following essay, I shall delve into must outstanding reasons.
To commence with, most of the companies looking for high- educated employees to be sure that their performance and qualities of work reach the companie’s customers desire. For instance, when I want to make some changes to my kitchen, I make many background search for the best companies, I found that the company that I choose have most professional engineer in internal design. All workers are supervised by engineer to be sure that the work are move smoothly and perfectly. This company was hired many of people with Bachelor’s degree to satisfy and have the maximum amount of clients and increase the out- come. Apparently, it must be taken into account that the competition for better career are increased because the main and most asked for the best employees are to be graduated from collages.
In addition, the salary for graduted persons in comparison to not graduted one are much higher. Furthermore, as much as the people are go forwards and gets masters degree or additional certificates, this definitely will enhance their income. For example, my brother gets many jobs when he was a high school students and at that time he believed the salary are very good and more than enough to even raise a family. Later, when he gets married and first child born, the money that he gets could not even be enough to cover all the family’s expence. With the encourage of his whife, he pursues hih bachlor’s degree and get better job withv well- knowned company. Moreover, after he continue his education and gets his master degree, many companies offer him an excellent jobs with high salary and many other benefits like medical insurance and once a year free tickets to travel.
In sum, after contemplatoing all the reasons that I mentioned before, I reinforce my idea that attending collages and universities are important to get higher salary jobs and be sure get a work in the first place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: affect
...e prepared for career which surely will affects your life's path. In the following...
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...yees are to be graduated from collages. In addition, the salary for graduted per...
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...en he gets married and first child born, the money that he gets could not even be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2284.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07555555556 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83435711351 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535555555556 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1617562942 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.210526316 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6842105263 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186286271221 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524367938543 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482206353993 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114226993716 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049929653783 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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