People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge) Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although there is no simple answer to this question, I profoundly believe that if there are any opportunities to attend school or university, I would tell them don*t hesitate to participate in college or university. It will offer us a great guarantee to build our identity in society and surroundings. Let me explain my opinion about this topic in below.
Firstly, from my perspective, we can get wide range of benefits from school, college or university. Education and gained professional play an important role in our life. For example, my grandfather, who passed away few years ago, always tell me that my goal, passion must meet to my educational, you are not allowed to dream your future without education. He was great write and even he was at 93 ages, he was working on his publishing book. When I think about him, I inspired a lot all the time. He was the biggest big role model for our family. That*s why my father and uncles are all got higher degree from universities. I believe that my father*s knowledge from the university make our life better, more enthusiastic.
Second, it allows us great opportunity to live as our dream. There is no doubt that all people in the world work and study hard. Especially we should follow the new technology evolution which requires us to get more knowledge. There is huge competition around school or working area. High ranking universities try to attract smart kids to their school and offer plenty variety of programs. For instance, my dream is to attend graduate school related to my undergraduate major. After my master’s degree, I hope I am able to be hired in big company with higher paycheck. And also, I want to be great role model for son who reminds me as a powerful, busy mom
Last but not the least, when people were asked about their educational level, some people tend to embarrass of their background. I have an own ambition that I will not discriminate people based on their education level. We do not know how people went through difficulties or how they were not able to participate in schools. On the other hand, I want poor people to become independent and try to develop themselves in any way.
From all the discussions mentioned above, I bet lots of people could not afford universities tuition fee or something else. But in the bright side, high developed countries encourage the students from developing country. That*s why if we wish and aim for our goals, there is always great chance to follow. We can draw the conclusion that we should gain our knowledge and improve our educational level during our whole life which can bring us a joy and satisfied life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79520697168 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75550642871 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564270152505 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3076923077 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6538461538 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6538461538 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88461538462 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160421754956 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390860331114 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328809354493 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838193661997 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138779509048 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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