People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there can be<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="are "></span> plenty of reasons for a person to join a college. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely say that people join for two reasons: to get a job and for pursuing higher studies. I will explore these examples in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, admission in a university is solely done to get a job in one's dream company. there are many students who live with dream of working for a company and then earning a handsome income. In order to get a job graduation is important which can only be done by taking admit into a university. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, when I and my friends completed our school we all wanted to do a job in our desired fields. In order to reach our goal we all took admission in respected universities for learning all the required skills to get a recruitment. By the time we reach the end of our course we all were talented enough to crack the interviews and get a job in our dream companies.Therefore, universities teach the required skills which the industries demand and help students to survive in the corporate world.
Secondly, some student have the passion towards study and wanted to become a scholar. there are children who have predilection for learning and wanted to study more and more new things. they just never get tired of learning. Such students have a solid reason to join a college and that is they want to deepen their knowledge in their preferable subject. Drawing from my own experience, my younger brother have a very sharp mind since childhood. he is always attracted towards books and one can always find him encompassed by them. As a result, when he completed his school, he wanted to join a university just because he can take his knowledge of physics to a higher level. he was interested in developing rockets and he thought that by joining a college he can give shape to his blueprints of rockets and take insights from them. Moreover, he wanted to study under the guidance of erudite which can only be found in educational institutions. It's certainly clear to see why some student want to get admit for advancing their acumen.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that the reasons behind student to join a college or university is to get recruited by a company so that they can make their career in industries and to advance their knowledge in their preferred subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77130044843 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17610136801 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493273542601 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1862497306 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2380952381 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129175588852 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365685919762 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033986996309 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083556992427 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191669956995 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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