People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that with the advancement and modernization of the world, humans are craving to raise the status of their life. In order to keep pace with the contemporary world, people are thriving hard. In this regard, having a hobby to release stress is of paramount importance. There are different schools of thought among people, where some adopt gardening, others contemplate reading books. If I were asked, I would definitely prefer the reading book to exhaust me from stress and to refresh my mind. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reason corroborating my stance is associated with the notion that books stimulate the imaginations that helps people to forget their worries, and it brings a positive change in their attitude. To be more specific, reading a fiction book gives an impression that all the things are occurring in real-time. This helps folks to forget their stress of daily life and they started to feel relax. By the way of illustration, After coming back from work and before going to bed, I am exhausted to carry on any other activity that can relieve my stress. However, reading my favorite genre "fiction" lightens my mood and reduces the stress of my whole day. Moreover, the visual depictions of the story help me to go deeper in the story and I started to feel myself in place of the main character. That moves me away from the stress of work and I sleep better after reading the book. Not only it releases my stress, but also it fills me with positive energy for the next day.
The second compelling rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that books are educative and informative, gaining the right knowledge will solve individuals' problems, and, hence, ease their stress. Usually, the problems that are making people anxious are common and have definite solutions. Figuring out correct solutions is critically important to escape the anxiety. Ultimately, books are the most accurate solution. As a case in mind to shed some light, Five years ago, when my son just started going to school, I encountered great hardships because of managing his daily routine along with his school homework. His private school was assigning him a great workload as a result he got extremely depressed. Being a mom that was not relaxing for me, my nights were sleepless because of my son's situation. Then my friend, Safa, recommended me some parenting books to read. her advice was a great stress reliever as it eliminated my problem. From that day to now, I make reading my best pal. Whenever I feel stressed because of some ongoing issues, I got help from a book to resolve my problem. My example clearly manifests that reading books releases tension.
By perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer that though people have other opportunities to keep themselves relax, reading books has innumerable advantages. For the sake of brevity, fer points are worth reiterating. First, it affects our mood through imagination and releases stress, Second, It provides educative solution of our problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 882, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Her
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, i feel, as a result, by and large, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2322.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88842105263 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70172121192 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564210526316 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3131840881 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3076923077 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2692307692 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26923076923 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202815357775 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583756944728 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383700341154 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150883926238 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270210564577 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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