people helpless to community
The first reason coming to my mind is that people are living in a sophisticated era which their time are consumed on their job in order to reach a high standard of living. As a matter of fact, due to high costs of living such as paying bills, housing, children's education, all of which are required a great deal money. Hence, both parents should have a full-time job in order to meet their basic needs and there is no time to a positive contribution to their communities. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. When I was a master student, I had decided to continue my study at a university abroad. Subsequently, I needed approximately 25000 dollars per year. Then, I had consulted with my parents, and they told me that we do not have this amount of money, but my father said me if I do not help our community, I am able to work more and pay you the money you need. For this reason, I think this is just one sample of today's problems which people are involved with them.
Another reason why I agree with it is that due to the rapid growth of technology people spend their time on many items such as playing video games, surfing on the internet, chatting with each other, all of which take a lot of their time. From a student’s point of view, they spend their leisure time on searching on the internet to download music, research about their field of study, and also try to increase their knowledge through many valuable sources on the internet. For example, when I was a bachelor student, I had a part-time job at the university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, on time, I had an interview with professor Nejati who is a well-known psychologist in my country. He told me that technology has created a huge gap among people, and communities because they think they can meet what they need with the using of various type of technology. For this reason, I strongly believe that the more people use the internet, the less they help their communities.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Working at home usingcomputers or telephones is better than working in the office. 70
- Some people like to work at home while others prefer to work in the office Which do you prefer and why 92
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？ Being creative, rather thanplanning carefully, helps people come up with the best solution to a problem 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problem to the public. 70
- it is easier to family member to become successful in their lives than the past 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 789, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...ave this amount of money, but my father said me if I do not help our community, I am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, well, for example, i think, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5348189415 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63870500439 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557103064067 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2821961869 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0701144841293 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247479562693 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340307828915 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566122805551 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012997495888 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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