People listen to music for the different reason and at different times. Why is music important to many people?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that music is a historical part of every given society and nowadays penetrate every single facet of our lives. As a matter of fact, music plays an important role in humans' lives due to the fact that it contributes substantially to decrease stress, enhance motivation, increase creativity and so forth. As far as I am concerned, not only can music influence our souls but also can teach us about cultures in past decades. In the following paragraphs, some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, music is part of every culture and history. Although vast majorities of people like it as an entertainment and fun, there is a real concept behind every type of music that shows the history of nations all around the world. Generally speaking, in many countries, people knew music as an enrich culture and believe that music transmitted generation to generation. For example, take traditional music with old fashion musical instruments into consideration provide an opportunity for individuals to become familiar with a part of history and different culture even in all around the globe. To elucidate more on this issue, music regardless of its type can patronize people especially students to understand what the culture is and how its concept has conveyed to next generations.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that music could have positive effects on people's health. To put it in another word, according to many studies, myriads of people suffer from severe stress caused by hard works, exams, competition and so on. In this case, crowds of people make an effort and bend over backward to relieve their stress use tablets, studying novels, watching movies and so forth, but none of those ways could influence people positively and ease the stress as music could. Going into the depth, many studies have shown that not only is music able to enhance peoples' motivation and incentive but also is able to keep people healthy.
Thirdly, many people listen to music for the sake of fun and entertain. Indeed, when people are depressed and bored, it is a great item to relive people and make them happy and hopeful. Arguably, playing a music can alive a nice memory from past years and make people to think wisely and not to forget or neglect everything.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that music has had many advantages for people throughout history. First, music is a symbol of culture and tradition that many people could get acquaintance with past generation. In addition, music can contribute greatly to the decline of stress and make people healthy. Finally, majorities of people listen to music owing to the fact that it is a real entertainment and could be fun for individuals, especially for youth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...in many countries, people knew music as an enrich culture and believe that music transmit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, third, thirdly, for example, in addition, as a matter of fact, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2364.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00847457627 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70184523645 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 756.9 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0604929851 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456693648574 0.236089414692 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154412001233 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834773221116 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267928789321 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090693089543 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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