People should never be satisfied with what they have, they should always want something new or? Something different do you agree or disagree.
All People learn many different things and experience variety of incidents during their life normally. They work, plan and work again routinely to achieve certain goals in their lives. However, some people become satisfied with one or two accomplishment. Yet there are some others who strongly tend to keep fighting to obtain more desires in this world during their life. I believe that a human cannot stop itself from demanding more achievement because of some specific reasons.
First, I think that it is in any persons’ nature to want more. Since, god created us with a set of special characteristics which makes us to demand higher goals as soon as we reach any one consequently. For example, my friend Jim always wanted to be a good well-known lawyer in our town. He studied so much to pass the LSAT test and enter a law school. However, after his success in LSAT test, he suggest that he wanted to be the best lawyer in the country. Because he thought that he had enough confidence to reach that wish. Surprisingly, these determined desires never stopped until he became the youngest district attorney in country.
Secondly, every man and woman not only should please its sense of greed and ambition but also its emotional needs must be satisfied correctly too. Concisely, I believe that someone can reach any purpose that he or she wanted most, but a strange feeling of anger and sadness still exists in its soul deeply. For instance a person may be selected to be chairman in a conglomerate company; but he feels unsatisfied as he cannot execute all his plans he scheduled for his management period. This is an obvious sample which cleared the fact that even though we reached our goals but our inside desire continuously forces us to try for even more accomplishments.
Also, some people requested that we live in a period of finite life which is going to end someday eventually. So, they propose that we must seize<span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> any opportunity we can get in our life.</span><br>
In conclusion, any person can choose to be persuaded with what he had or he could do his best to gain more and more victories until the end of his life. Shortly, it will be your decision where you should stop your wishes or not. But, I believe that this is a tricky issue that never can be limited.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
All People learn many different things and experience variety of incide...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... any persons' nature to want more. Since, god created us with a set of special c...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...demand higher goals as soon as we reach any one consequently. For example, my friend Ji...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...ver, after his success in LSAT test, he suggest that he wanted to be the best lawyer in...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d to be the best lawyer in the country. Because he thought that he had enough confidenc...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to try for even more accomplishments. Also, some people requested that we live...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80348258706 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83435088896 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8864144069 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.55 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152000895417 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443103182619 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369766773138 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820813299933 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347081010228 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.