People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Since decades humans are involved in performing various kinds of activities. There are many benefits of working apart from earning money for a living. I will explore the reasons in the following passages.
To begin with, going to a job keeps people socially involved and active. As we all are living in society, it becomes critically crucial to mingle and interact with people. At work, we meet people with different cultures and languages, therefore we get to learn the customs and rituals from each other. My own experience demonstrates convincing evidence of this. During my first year of working as a junior research assistant in a company, I met myriad people and we became close friends. We learned many things from each other, our cultural, traditional dresses, and languages so on. We used to invite to each other's house for a festival or any kind of occasion.
In addition to this, the job also develops communication skills, hence improved the way people blend and communicate with others. Communication is one of the most important skills to have in onces life. People judge others on the basis of communication in today's world. Take my cousin for example, when she was in her school, she used to be a pretty shy and timid girl, but later, she started her working in the city in a cooperate office, she was totally changed. sHE was not same as before, she grew into a confident and graceful woman when I asked about her transformation, she told me that she often has to do presentations, and public speaking in the company which helped her grew. This example illustrates how work can be helpful in boosting confidence.
Finally, people remain healthy and active in everyday jobs. A job gives a purpose in life to be active and remain busy. Life can be very boring without challenges. So when the challenges are overcome, it gives satisfaction and happiness. For instance, when I was not working, I used to stay late in the bed, watch television the entire day, waste money like water and there was no purpose in life, ever since I started working, I became more disciplined, it taught me the value of time and money. it gave a purpose in my life that is to make my life better each day.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that a career provide an active social life, improves skills like communication skills, and benefits people with good health apart from providing the salary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ion and happiness. For instance, when I wasnt working, I used to stay late in the bed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, so, therefore, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80195599022 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69721716259 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577017114914 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9470786938 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3913043478 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7826086957 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47826086957 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164560881684 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470601726313 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406124282425 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819467506895 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323069065136 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.