A person should do job which he loves but gives him low salary or a job providing high sakty but not like
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that individuals have to strive and thrive hard in order to gain higher status in the world. Vividly, with the modernization of world people living standards are extremely skyeocketed. In this regard, the jobs and employements are of paramount importance which provide the people a source to achieve their goals and dreams. there are different schools of thoughts amongst scholars, wheather person need to choose a job which are low salary but provides them happiness, or he contemplate their needs first and choose job which provide them high salary but they donot like doing it. If I were asked, i would subscribe to the letter idea. I will delve into most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
First reason coming to my mind to elucidate my standpoint is associated with the notion that in this advanced world where people have contemporary livestyles it is arduous for individuals to accomplish their wishes and needs in low salary. they might enjoy doing their job but that will lead them to be unhappy and unsuccessfull in life. On the other hand, a person who is earning high salary could easily live a comfortable lifestyle where he not only attain his life's dreams but also provide for his family. It is axiomatic that after all these effoerts, his bond with his family members grew stronger and his life would be filled with pleasures. My personal example is copelling example iof this. Five years ago, I was doing a low salary job but it was the job which i loved most, as an artist. I could not provide enough for my family and my relationship with them deterioarte as a result. Then, last year i switched my job to high earned slary job but not i loved most. surprisingly, myb relationship with my family members got better as i could fulfil their demands and it brough joy to my life as well. It is crystal clear to see why high salary jobs are important in life.
The second reason behind my rationale is rooted in the fact that when a person is getting high salary from a job, he remained dedicated to his job. It is noticeable that person would work hard to keep his job and have a good impression on his boss. Therfore, he worked toward building relationships with his collegues as well. Ultimately, this all will leads to his prosperity and success. For the sake of illustartion, my brother is working for a comapny who are paying him high salary. My brother was not a hard worker, but just because his company provides him with incentives and increments, he motiavtes to work hard and try to be good in colleagues and in his supervisor's eyes. If his comapny had not gave him high slary, he would not have motivated to work effectively.
BY perusing above paragraphs, one can infer that though doing a job that you love entails you with the feeling that you never worked, but monetary value and high salary is critically important in life. For the sake of brevity, few points are reiterating. First, high salaries will serve the purpose of fulfilment of individual and his loved one's needs. Second, it will motivate him to work strenously and become successful at work. As for writer's opinion, I vehemently urge people to choose a job that provides them high salary as it ultimately brings happiness in their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, well, after all, as for, as a result, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2716.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 576.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71527777778 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89897948557 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64438161909 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 848.7 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1117984796 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89285714286 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355503796371 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985341329776 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104528948732 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240843458382 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038496716318 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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